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| Lidia_Apricot wrote: | I posted my part. Yay! :3
Could some of you read it and kindly tell me if it's good, please?
To be honest, I think is not that good, but hopefully my next post will be better. ^^! |
I agree with Shadow, your post was very good, the slight dispair of the character; Is this all! is there nothing more? the feeling of being trapped in her own life. Of course the mask of cheerfulness she must wear to get through it all. Very good indeed. 
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| Tearlach wrote: | | I think it would be best to for both parties, when organized to stay on the one thread but we will see what happens. |
I'll try my hardest to help keep it organized enough for one thread.
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| Posted: Tue May 12, 2009 6:49 am Post subject: |
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| ShadowFox13 wrote: | | Tearlach wrote: | | I think it would be best to for both parties, when organized to stay on the one thread but we will see what happens. |
I'll try my hardest to help keep it organized enough for one thread. |
I know that you and Mr. Tearlach are doing a wonderful job organizing the threads and the roleplay. :3 |
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| Posted: Tue May 12, 2009 7:11 am Post subject: |
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| Lidia_Apricot wrote: | | ShadowFox13 wrote: | | Tearlach wrote: | | I think it would be best to for both parties, when organized to stay on the one thread but we will see what happens. |
I'll try my hardest to help keep it organized enough for one thread. |
I know that you and Mr. Tearlach are doing a wonderful job organizing the threads and the roleplay. :3 |
Thank You Lady Lidia.
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That was a very short intro too.
I take that back Crimson's was very short short, yours was just short in comparison. 
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We still need 4 people to post their characters on the character thread.
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| ShadowFox13 wrote: | | We still need 4 people to post their characters on the character thread. |
down to 3
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| henkcobra wrote: | | ShadowFox13 wrote: | | ShadowFox13 wrote: | | We still need 4 people to post their characters on the character thread. |
down to 3 |
but is it good enough??????????????????????? |
Yes, it's descriptive quality is more than enough to understand the character.
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| Tearlach wrote: | | I think it is all going rather well, fingers crossed. |
Don't jinx us. 
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| xivk wrote: | | Waiting game sucks doesnt it? ^_^ |
Your wait is over... get in there and post your part, buddy!
If I sound eager, it's only because I've got you and Caroline to wait on until I can repost my intro (and yes, I'll probably just repost my original intro from the original thread, but only because I really, really liked it).
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Well got me part in, hoping it goes well. ^_^
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| henkcobra wrote: | Oke greg, help me with the background of us
1 how we know eachother
2 how did you got my letter
3 the reason for my letter
4 no sex with my mistress until we are underway to the treasure. |
Yeah...I'm sry about not telling you guys some answer, because i was very busy lately. Alright, here's the answer:
1. They know each other since when Greg meets you in the beginning.
2. Greg got ur letter from his mailbox
3. It's your choice, like do you need assistance, you just invited my character, or other
4. Greg won't do that
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By the way greg I sat on you by accident. ^_^
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Shit! I realized that I never described Shadow's "1920's" formal wear,I only gave the additions to his everyday outfit.
I was going to start my next post with him coming down from his quarters properly dressed for the ball that's already (or should be) started but no one would know what he looked like.
His suit, white with black accents, is complete contrast with his fur, black with white and red accents (I found a pic that is pretty close to help explain it). The suit, hat, and tie are white (just like in the pic) and the accents (silk shirt, silk handkerchief that is slightly protruding from his left breast pocket, his gloves, the band on his hat, and ect.) are all jet black (not like the pic). He still has his knives concealed in his sleeves and pistol on his hip.
**I know it's not very descriptive and I apologize but I guess it's better than nothing. If more of a description is needed just ask me and I'll fix it after work.**
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don;t know maybe have much time with fun, say can I make a storry of you with me and lots and lots of bondage? |
Sorry, but I'll have to say no to that. I don't like the idea of someone else writing stories about my fursona.
I really should get started on my own intro soon. I'll write and have it ready to post, because I'll have time to come by here on Friday, so I can just post it if it's my turn. But I'll be gone all Saturday and some of Sunday.
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Is Tearlach and Shadow decision if we should wait till Ms. Caroline post her turn, or her turn will be skip and Johnny will post his since one of the roleplay rule stated if he/she does not post within the limit of 24 hours, his/her turn will be skipped and the person goes after him/her will post their.
Like I say, Is up to Tearlach and Shadow. |
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Since it is her introduction I was thinking about making an exception to the rule but that's only if no one has any issues with it.
And later on during the game it will automatically jump to the next person, you won't have to wait for us to say anything.
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