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Who is your favorite character? (Image links are located in my post)
ShadowFox
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Ordo
25%
 25%  [ 1 ]
KrystalBlaze
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Felecia
25%
 25%  [ 1 ]
Arctic (doesn't appear in story until chapter 7)
25%
 25%  [ 1 ]
Other (please comment)
25%
 25%  [ 1 ]
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 26, 2012 2:35 pm    Post subject: "The Shadow of a Fox" comments topic Reply with quote

This is for all of the feedback, comments, and questions reguarding my story. Smile
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 26, 2012 2:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Since I couldn't get the links to work in the poll I'll put them here. Sorry.

ShadowFox image
Ordo image
KrystalBlaze image
Felecia image
Arctic image
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 27, 2012 5:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

After seeing the images its hard to decide.
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 27, 2012 7:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I also now have the drafts for Arctic and Ordo so hopefully soon I'll be able to add links for both of them as well.
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 27, 2012 7:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wow, really nice artwork. I can't decide who to like more.
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 01, 2012 5:03 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I can't take credit for the artwork. These were done as part of an ongoing mass commission that the talented Arctic-Sekai has agreed to do. Months ago I was desperately looking for an artist to undertake the daunting task of working with me to bring these characters to life. I was having a hard time doing it myself because they were constantly changing in my head so I decided to suck it up and go on the hunt for a good artist. After being taken for a ride by a few different artists I finally found Arctic-Sekai and she agreed to take the impossible job. And damn did I luck out because she has done an absolutely amazing job so far.

So please if you like them let her know on her DA and/or FA page.
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 11, 2012 7:55 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I have a question; Is there too much of a time gap between posts for my story?
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 11, 2012 8:34 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I don't think there is. I say take your time and don't rush it, its a very good read.
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 13, 2012 1:28 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ok I just wanted to make sure. I'm glad that you think its good so far.
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2012 9:54 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm sorry but Arctic hasn't posted the Ordo or Arctic pics for me to put a link on them. So instead I have made a new note on my Facebook page with each of them.

http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=552881957&ref=profile#!/notes/joshua-conley/and-the-team-is-complete/10150667251857716
(I don't know how well this link is going to work so please let me know)

Edit: Ok so it doesn't work like I wanted it to. But there is a way to get it to work:
1) Coppy the entire link into your url
2) friend me (I guess :/ I tried to make the note public but oh well)
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 19, 2012 2:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I finally picked other. Main reason is I can't decide as all are good.
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 21, 2012 6:20 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I now have links for the other two.

Ordo
Arctic
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 30, 2013 1:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I have new updates for each of the characters now!! Very Happy

Christopher "ShadowFox" Conley:

In Civ. clothes

His Recon Armor

His "All-purpose" Armor

His Heavy Armor


Marie "KrystalBlaze" Feeney

In Civ clothes

In her only armor


Jake "Ordo" Smith

In Civ clothes

His Recon Armor

His "All-purpose" Armor

His Heavy armor


And Arctic Ikumè

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 30, 2013 1:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Also I have a dilemma!
Sadly I have found out that in 1994 there was a book already titled "The Shadow of a Fox" Sad
I need help coming up with a new title!!! Please
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 02, 2013 3:51 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

ShadowFox13 wrote:
Also I have a dilemma!
Sadly I have found out that in 1994 there was a book already titled "The Shadow of a Fox" Sad
I need help coming up with a new title!!! Please


" Vulpine," "Kitsune"

The shade of a Fox

In the Fox's shade

Waiter, there is a fox in my soup! Shocked Laughing Twisted Evil

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 02, 2013 6:30 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

((Hey Shadow,

Well... on a sidenote, I finally saw a Pittsburgh Penguin... and they were awful >_< You'd think they'd not have known how to skate! And to New York... NEW YORK!!! But, anyway.

So... a new story title? Um... what sort of story are you trying to write? Given the three soldiers and one extra, but the overall serious look to everyone, I'm assuming it isn't a comedy-buddy-action genre, but more something like... Tom Clancy would write.

Anyway, iffn you can supply that, without ruining the story, I might be able to give you some ideas as to a title.

Without that, and based completely on the art... I'd suggest the following:

"Bounty Hunters" ))
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 10, 2013 1:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Tearlach wrote:

" Vulpine," "Kitsune"

The shade of a Fox

In the Fox's shade

Waiter, there is a fox in my soup! Shocked Laughing Twisted Evil


I think that last one shows some promise. I'll keep bouncing the ideas around in my head.

Caroline wrote:
((Hey Shadow,

Well... on a sidenote, I finally saw a Pittsburgh Penguin... and they were awful >_< You'd think they'd not have known how to skate! And to New York... NEW YORK!!! But, anyway.

So... a new story title? Um... what sort of story are you trying to write? Given the three soldiers and one extra, but the overall serious look to everyone, I'm assuming it isn't a comedy-buddy-action genre, but more something like... Tom Clancy would write.

Anyway, iffn you can supply that, without ruining the story, I might be able to give you some ideas as to a title.

Without that, and based completely on the art... I'd suggest the following:

"Bounty Hunters" ))


So you're the reason they lost. because the won both games prior and the next five in a row (including their remach with the Islanders) Razz

And yes it is a bit more in the line of a Tom Clancy type of story. but I don't really know how to sum it up because it constantly changes as I write it and the ending (the only solid part of the story in my head) is where it all comes together and if I said that it would just ruin it all. Sad Confused
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 07, 2014 11:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well I guess I could try to get this back up and running again. I'm actually trying to work past some epic writer's block and it's been killing me and my last two chapters have really suffered because of it. But as of now I'm working on chapter 13 and have about 56,000 words.
The thought occurred to me that it might be getting too long. Confused
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