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henkcobra
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 1:03 pm    Post subject: Avatar update Reply with quote

I made this topic because I have not much background of my avatar, but the rest will be the same.

Membership start: 10-08-07

Name: Henk Cobra

Age: 21

Profession: Commando ( Does mission when other soldiers say no, always has a sword with him)

Species: Cobra

Build: Normal posture, 6 pack, muscles of 5 years of training and duty.

Height: 1,81 meter

Weight: 75- 80 kg

Hair: Has no hair

Fur: Has no fur.

Eyes: Grey-blue

Clothes: Black shoes, purple/black strip jeans, purple sweater, black vest and 3 golden chains with a snake as medalion.

Personality: on mission he's always angry, off duty he's nice respects everyone, is still a virgin, likes males and females, is shy when some beatty talks to him, plays some gitare, always want to do the good things in live, bite a loner, can always be trusted, has a weak point to cubs

scales: green

Has legs

Has a samoerey sword
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 1:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Part 1: Henk was only 15 years old when he wanted to join the army. Because there was not much money at the farm, he had to go and they could use the money. He was fascinated of the land Japan. The great warriors. The first to see the sun coming up.

The Netherlands where the only ones who had a colony there, so with some talking about a officer who would go to Japan Henk became his recruit and had to do some house holding and to serve at least 5 years in the army.

While he was a recruit he got trained in Bushido, could only learn the basics because he was a outsider. And he had to learn fast or his family could get trouble.

After a long trip over sea, the officer found a old Japanese friend who would teach the young man the basics of the way of Bushido.
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 3:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm not to sure if we can post criticisms here but I found a few things you might want to think about.

1)Bushido is the Samurai code of ethics literally meaning "Way of the Warrior" I would type more but wikipedia did a good job already: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bushid%C5%8D

2)Keep in mind your time frames here.If you started in the Army at 15 and spent 5 years before going to Japan,it gives you 1 year to sail to Japan,train,and sail back to Europe.

For training purposes keep this frame in mind:

1-3years for a good foundation of basics

3-6years to obtain a black belt(mastery of the basics)

6-10years to become a master of a style.
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 3:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

DesertWolf wrote:
I'm not to sure if we can post criticisms here but I found a few things you might want to think about.

1)Bushido is the Samurai code of ethics literally meaning "Way of the Warrior" I would type more but wikipedia did a good job already: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bushid%C5%8D

2)Keep in mind your time frames here.If you started in the Army at 15 and spent 5 years before going to Japan,it gives you 1 year to sail to Japan,train,and sail back to Europe.

For training purposes keep this frame in mind:

1-3years for a good foundation of basics


3-6years to obtain a black belt(mastery of the basics)

6-10years to become a master of a style.


I never said that I was a master or had a black beld. I only know the basics no more. But thanks for the info.

And maybe I'm not so good in the spelling, but I spend my training and serve in Japan and around the Netherlands colonies. But that's part 2 and more.
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 8:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Criticism aside, I'm glad you made your background updated. Will be a big help in my story that has your cameo Very Happy Thank you Henk.
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 8:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Interesting info that somebody from the army was in Bonbon.
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 9:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Rune174 wrote:
Interesting info that somebody from the army was in Bonbon.

Are you kidding? The Royal Members alone are awash with several soldiers...
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 10:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

To be honest, if this was any later in the early 20th century, I would've loved to be part of the original Majesty's RAF.
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 10:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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Personality: on mission he's always angry, off duty he's nice respects everyone, IS STILL A VIRGIN, likes males and females, is shy when some beatty talks to him, plays some gitare, always want to do the good things in live, bite a loner, can always be trusted, has a weak point to cubs


Hahaha! Henk! Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing

Thats a good one!
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 08, 2009 7:42 pm    Post subject: andy Reply with quote

ok i just started but my description

name:andy
age:18
profession:simple farm boy
species:wolf
build:6'2 muscles
long dark brown hair
can someone tell scorpia about this
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 10, 2009 12:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

JohnnyPsycho wrote:
Rune174 wrote:
Interesting info that somebody from the army was in Bonbon.

Are you kidding? The Royal Members alone are awash with several soldiers...


Well, some are simply raised or trained, but how many are actual veterans of the armed forces? (not counting their real life people behind them.)

Is Tursi a naval captain, or simply the captain of a ship? Some are just body guards or patrol men, but not actual members of a nation's armed forces.

I believe Henk is one of the few who actually is, (and a deserter too, right?)
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 10, 2009 1:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Captain Merriwether is just a steamship captain. He hasn't spoken much of his past, but there certainly /could/ be some naval experience in it, since he's a bit beyond the "young cub" stage of life. Wink

At any rate, yes, today he's employed to pilot passenger liners back and forth across the Atlantic, visiting BonBon when he's on that side of the pond. Wink
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 10, 2009 2:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Tursi wrote:
Captain Merriwether is just a steamship captain. He hasn't spoken much of his past, but there certainly /could/ be some naval experience in it, since he's a bit beyond the "young cub" stage of life. Wink

At any rate, yes, today he's employed to pilot passenger liners back and forth across the Atlantic, visiting BonBon when he's on that side of the pond. Wink


See? There's plenty with combat related or military related, but not authentic military backgrounds. ^_^
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 10, 2009 6:40 pm    Post subject: Re: andy Reply with quote

furrynerd wrote:
ok i just started but my description

name:andy
age:18
profession:simple farm boy
species:wolf
build:6'2 muscles
long dark brown hair
can someone tell scorpia about this


Um Sir... Can you make your own thread instead of squatting here... Just lettin yah know its a little rude.
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 8:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

if its rude im sorry i just dont know where else to put it.but please tell scorpia about this though
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 3:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You can go to one of Miss Scorpia's threads and message her there.

How about her art thread?

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 3:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You know, Henk, with all that you have posted about sex in other threads, I'm a little surprised that you haven't added some sexual preferences to your fursona description.
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 3:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Symphony wrote:
You know, Henk, with all that you have posted about sex in other threads, I'm a little surprised that you haven't added some sexual preferences to your fursona description.
he also forgot to take off the still a virgin part
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 4:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The Adept wrote:
He also forgot to take off the still a virgin part


Perhaps he didn't forget. Wink
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 10:01 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Henk my first avatar



Dunya my second avatar and fiancée of Henk

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