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henkcobra Royal Member of BonBon
Joined: 28 Jan 2008 Posts: 4122
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Posted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 1:03 pm Post subject: Avatar update |
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I made this topic because I have not much background of my avatar, but the rest will be the same.
Membership start: 10-08-07
Name: Henk Cobra
Age: 21
Profession: Commando ( Does mission when other soldiers say no, always has a sword with him)
Species: Cobra
Build: Normal posture, 6 pack, muscles of 5 years of training and duty.
Height: 1,81 meter
Weight: 75- 80 kg
Hair: Has no hair
Fur: Has no fur.
Eyes: Grey-blue
Clothes: Black shoes, purple/black strip jeans, purple sweater, black vest and 3 golden chains with a snake as medalion.
Personality: on mission he's always angry, off duty he's nice respects everyone, is still a virgin, likes males and females, is shy when some beatty talks to him, plays some gitare, always want to do the good things in live, bite a loner, can always be trusted, has a weak point to cubs
scales: green
Has legs
Has a samoerey sword _________________ Avatar: http://forums.pleasurebonbon.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=7830
My favorite RP please join and dominate me : http://forums.pleasurebonbon.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=6811&start=0
My FA; http://www.furaffinity.net/user/henkcobra/ |
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henkcobra Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 1:25 pm Post subject: |
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Part 1: Henk was only 15 years old when he wanted to join the army. Because there was not much money at the farm, he had to go and they could use the money. He was fascinated of the land Japan. The great warriors. The first to see the sun coming up.
The Netherlands where the only ones who had a colony there, so with some talking about a officer who would go to Japan Henk became his recruit and had to do some house holding and to serve at least 5 years in the army.
While he was a recruit he got trained in Bushido, could only learn the basics because he was a outsider. And he had to learn fast or his family could get trouble.
After a long trip over sea, the officer found a old Japanese friend who would teach the young man the basics of the way of Bushido. _________________ Avatar: http://forums.pleasurebonbon.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=7830
My favorite RP please join and dominate me : http://forums.pleasurebonbon.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=6811&start=0
My FA; http://www.furaffinity.net/user/henkcobra/
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DesertWolf Rank: Super Veteran
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Posted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 3:04 pm Post subject: |
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I'm not to sure if we can post criticisms here but I found a few things you might want to think about.
1)Bushido is the Samurai code of ethics literally meaning "Way of the Warrior" I would type more but wikipedia did a good job already: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bushid%C5%8D
2)Keep in mind your time frames here.If you started in the Army at 15 and spent 5 years before going to Japan,it gives you 1 year to sail to Japan,train,and sail back to Europe.
For training purposes keep this frame in mind:
1-3years for a good foundation of basics
3-6years to obtain a black belt(mastery of the basics)
6-10years to become a master of a style. _________________ “If you love life, don’t waste time, for time is what life is made up of.”
– Bruce Lee |
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henkcobra Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 3:12 pm Post subject: |
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DesertWolf wrote: | I'm not to sure if we can post criticisms here but I found a few things you might want to think about.
1)Bushido is the Samurai code of ethics literally meaning "Way of the Warrior" I would type more but wikipedia did a good job already: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bushid%C5%8D
2)Keep in mind your time frames here.If you started in the Army at 15 and spent 5 years before going to Japan,it gives you 1 year to sail to Japan,train,and sail back to Europe.
For training purposes keep this frame in mind:
1-3years for a good foundation of basics
3-6years to obtain a black belt(mastery of the basics)
6-10years to become a master of a style. |
I never said that I was a master or had a black beld. I only know the basics no more. But thanks for the info.
And maybe I'm not so good in the spelling, but I spend my training and serve in Japan and around the Netherlands colonies. But that's part 2 and more. _________________ Avatar: http://forums.pleasurebonbon.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=7830
My favorite RP please join and dominate me : http://forums.pleasurebonbon.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=6811&start=0
My FA; http://www.furaffinity.net/user/henkcobra/ |
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TheBashfulFeline Rank: Mr. Fabulous
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Posted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 8:57 pm Post subject: |
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Criticism aside, I'm glad you made your background updated. Will be a big help in my story that has your cameo Thank you Henk. _________________ I'm not dead, just.... Hibernating. ON the MOON. :3 Luna's bum. |
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Rune174 Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 8:58 pm Post subject: |
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Interesting info that somebody from the army was in Bonbon. _________________
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JohnnyPsycho Royal Member of BonBon
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TheBashfulFeline Rank: Mr. Fabulous
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Posted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 10:35 pm Post subject: |
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To be honest, if this was any later in the early 20th century, I would've loved to be part of the original Majesty's RAF. _________________ I'm not dead, just.... Hibernating. ON the MOON. :3 Luna's bum. |
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Wallstreet Rank: Mr. Fabulous
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Posted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 10:45 pm Post subject: |
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Quote: | Personality: on mission he's always angry, off duty he's nice respects everyone, IS STILL A VIRGIN, likes males and females, is shy when some beatty talks to him, plays some gitare, always want to do the good things in live, bite a loner, can always be trusted, has a weak point to cubs
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Hahaha! Henk!
Thats a good one! _________________ Ewan's Golden Glass
Fine Alcohol and Good Times
Who the hell is Ewan Bushmill?
A reference: http://forums.pleasurebonbon.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=7319 |
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furrynerd Rank: Super Veteran
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LabrnMystic Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Tue Nov 10, 2009 12:59 pm Post subject: |
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JohnnyPsycho wrote: | Rune174 wrote: | Interesting info that somebody from the army was in Bonbon. |
Are you kidding? The Royal Members alone are awash with several soldiers... |
Well, some are simply raised or trained, but how many are actual veterans of the armed forces? (not counting their real life people behind them.)
Is Tursi a naval captain, or simply the captain of a ship? Some are just body guards or patrol men, but not actual members of a nation's armed forces.
I believe Henk is one of the few who actually is, (and a deserter too, right?) _________________ The suspense is killing me. I hope it will last. |
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Tursi Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Tue Nov 10, 2009 1:40 pm Post subject: |
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Captain Merriwether is just a steamship captain. He hasn't spoken much of his past, but there certainly /could/ be some naval experience in it, since he's a bit beyond the "young cub" stage of life.
At any rate, yes, today he's employed to pilot passenger liners back and forth across the Atlantic, visiting BonBon when he's on that side of the pond. _________________ http://harmlesslion.com |
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LabrnMystic Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Tue Nov 10, 2009 2:16 pm Post subject: |
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Tursi wrote: | Captain Merriwether is just a steamship captain. He hasn't spoken much of his past, but there certainly /could/ be some naval experience in it, since he's a bit beyond the "young cub" stage of life.
At any rate, yes, today he's employed to pilot passenger liners back and forth across the Atlantic, visiting BonBon when he's on that side of the pond. |
See? There's plenty with combat related or military related, but not authentic military backgrounds. ^_^ _________________ The suspense is killing me. I hope it will last. |
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TheBashfulFeline Rank: Mr. Fabulous
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Posted: Tue Nov 10, 2009 6:40 pm Post subject: Re: andy |
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furrynerd wrote: | ok i just started but my description
name:andy
age:18
profession:simple farm boy
species:wolf
build:6'2 muscles
long dark brown hair
can someone tell scorpia about this |
Um Sir... Can you make your own thread instead of squatting here... Just lettin yah know its a little rude. _________________ I'm not dead, just.... Hibernating. ON the MOON. :3 Luna's bum. |
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Mystic Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 3:22 pm Post subject: |
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You can go to one of Miss Scorpia's threads and message her there.
How about her art thread? _________________ Oh, I'd tell myself
What good do you do
Convince myself |
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Symphony Royal Member of BonBon
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The Adept Royal Member of BonBon
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Mystic Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 4:10 pm Post subject: |
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The Adept wrote: | He also forgot to take off the still a virgin part |
Perhaps he didn't forget. _________________ Oh, I'd tell myself
What good do you do
Convince myself |
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henkcobra Royal Member of BonBon
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