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Kiala_Tiagra Royal Member of BonBon

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Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 8:40 am Post subject: issue 8 is here |
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oh i just noticed the change in the comic gallery. issue 8 is a specialized comic for the members I think =D
anyway here is my review of the comic
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Page 2: loving the comedy in it, especially with henk's and conner/bestile's swords.
also, a very good secyrity for what mr genpyris is doing =3
Page 3: I am loving Jilian's dress, its gorgoues!
Page 5-6: loving miss mayflower's appearance, appealing and gorgoues
and also, i love what she did to mr.mlock, he is kinda pervy and rude XD sorry to say. And lol on chocolate horse comment
Page 7-8: Well, the dalmatian lady is very quick to strip herself ain;t it? But i love her lingerie design. very nice work miss vanessa
But i also love what happened to lord nelson and the dalmatian lady on page 8, very nice and passionate position, also in page 10 and page 11
Page 8-10: I love the comedy to what happened to brandon, the teasing by the barlady, the trap, which includes what the barlady twin do to them *giggles*
and also the flowerpot hat...it really made my day that i can;t stop laughing. Including the ass grab. Poor brandon though :<
Page 11-12: I loving what happened between miss lidia and mr Crimson,
the neck biting is what i love, combine it with the passionate pose, and cupping. Truly wonderful. I also love how mr crimson grabs miss lidia in page 12
Page 12-13: well i am loving the scene of miss kommy and mr labryn
very romantic with the flower touch, and also on page 35, loving the moment just before the sudden entry as labryn poke the slit area
Page 13-14: more than one partner is always a yes on my list, its very lucky what happened to miss mystic ;3
I love the most page 14, the way mr gantros uses his hands on her breast, very arousing. Also the way how he and mr ronald use their hands on the lower area. I am also liking how mr Gantros grabs miss mystic's thigh.
Page 15-16: I love the entry shot on page 15, its very teasing like. loving how mr foxonian and mrs socrpia looks, what i like even more is the joke
"You better be careful around the pipes when they blow"
Overall my review is:
Art: loving it as always
Comedy: fresh, makes me laugh, and wanting it more
sexual: well its the best really. I'm a bit aroused reading the comic.
so yeah congratulations miss vanessa for the incredible comic, it made my day
5 out of 5 x3 _________________ My fursona can be seen here
http://forums.pleasurebonbon.com/forums/viewtopic.php?p=197025#197025 |
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Lidia_Apricot Royal Member of BonBon

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Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 8:58 am Post subject: |
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Oh, yeah!
They changed the Issue 7 cover. :3
Wow! The details on the color and shading on cover 7 are Amazing! :3
I think is good they changed the cover, for it suited the story behind the cover!
Can't wait to see more in Issue 8!
Good Organization and Fantastic work!  |
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henkcobra Royal Member of BonBon

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Kasumi Rank: Senior Member
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Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 9:26 am Post subject: |
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I was always wondering about when Issue "7" would be fixed. I am glad that the covers are now repaired with the correct numbering.
For those that want a preview of the new page 1 in Issue 8, the Work In Progress shows it. I was wondering how the new page was going to fit into the story, and now I see it's the new "intro" page into Issue 8.
Mary's face is so sad, but her pose is so unbelievably sexy at the same time. |
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Symphony Royal Member of BonBon

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Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 10:16 am Post subject: |
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I think it was the rights choice to split up issue 7 in two. It was getting rather long.
I'll be interesting to see what happens next. I hope we'll see Mary go to Bon Bon soon. I just love those pages where the town and the people are shown.  _________________ Constance Mayflower's bio
Constance Mayflower's diary
The Mayflower Diaries |
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xivk Royal Member of BonBon

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Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 2:06 pm Post subject: |
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Lost the biggest issue so far status, but the interest in seeing the new pages is higher now. ^_^ _________________ Fursona Info.
I am the ghost of games... What i am, all i will be
-Xivk |
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Lord Nelson Royal Member of BonBon

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Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 4:40 pm Post subject: |
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Symphony wrote: | I think it was the rights choice to split up issue 7 in two. It was getting rather long. |
Not as long as some other things, I assure you. |
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UltimaWolf0 Royal Member of BonBon

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Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 7:14 pm Post subject: |
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Looks like I'm in the new comic.
Anyway, so those are the changes mentioned. |
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Kiala_Tiagra Royal Member of BonBon

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Symphony Royal Member of BonBon

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Kiala_Tiagra Royal Member of BonBon

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Mystic Royal Member of BonBon

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Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 4:42 pm Post subject: |
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Now I wonder what that does to Miss Vanessa's comic count. She gave us the total she had in mind earlier, but that was before this edit. _________________ Oh, I'd tell myself
What good do you do
Convince myself |
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kommy Royal Member of BonBon

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Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 10:51 pm Post subject: |
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In with the new issue, same as the old issue?
It was a good place to put a break in issues in retrospect. Makes Issue 8 seem like a 'filler arc' consisting of fanservice. Which is quite popular amongst those here, unsurprisingly. _________________ "Doktor! Are you sure this will work?!" "HAHA! I HAVE NO IDEA!" |
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Lidia_Apricot Royal Member of BonBon

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Posted: Wed Sep 09, 2009 5:44 am Post subject: |
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Check it out! A WIP page for the upcoming page! :3
Somehow, I am understanding who is the "Guest." in this Issue.
I'm sure some of us had known this since the beginning, but I admit and that some of us and I we're too focus on "the Guest" at the "BonBon Ball", we didn't thought about "the Guest" at The Blue Manor!
Can't wait to see it in color!  |
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xivk Royal Member of BonBon

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Posted: Wed Sep 09, 2009 1:53 pm Post subject: |
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Think im missing it who the guest is... ?_? _________________ Fursona Info.
I am the ghost of games... What i am, all i will be
-Xivk |
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JohnnyPsycho Royal Member of BonBon

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UltimaWolf0 Royal Member of BonBon

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Posted: Wed Sep 09, 2009 7:38 pm Post subject: |
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Interesting preview. Though with only the window colored, it looks like the world inside the house is all black and white the outside world is in color. |
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Kiala_Tiagra Royal Member of BonBon

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Lidia_Apricot Royal Member of BonBon

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Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 6:24 am Post subject: |
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Yay! New page! :3
I just want to hug William! (One of this days, I'll ask an artist for a commission of Lidia giving William her ferret death hug. )
He looks cute and silly wearing a pink bandanna (is that what they are call?) on his head! ^w^
As always, Ms. Vanessa! You're color work are absolutely stunning!
Keep up the good work! :3 |
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kommy Royal Member of BonBon

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Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 9:14 am Post subject: |
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The plot thickens. And not due to the addition of corn starch! I won't be so bold as to guess at the nature of the mystery guest.
I do find it amusing that Mary is described by Will as a sex fiend. That earned a chuckle. _________________ "Doktor! Are you sure this will work?!" "HAHA! I HAVE NO IDEA!" |
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Chaosengine Rank: Super Veteran

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Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 9:40 am Post subject: |
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Mystery guest, eh?
I'm picturing Red at the door...
*whistles*
Enter the Douchebag. _________________ "One night in Bangkok and the world's your oyster.
The bars are temples, but the pearls ain't free...
You'll find a god in every golden cloister,
And if you're lucky then the god's a she..." |
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UltimaWolf0 Royal Member of BonBon

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Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 6:22 pm Post subject: |
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Just imagine that was at full strength at the time...  |
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Kiala_Tiagra Royal Member of BonBon

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Posted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 7:56 am Post subject: |
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kommy wrote: | The plot thickens. And not due to the addition of corn starch! I won't be so bold as to guess at the nature of the mystery guest.
I do find it amusing that Mary is described by Will as a sex fiend. That earned a chuckle. |
well we can;t blame mary for being a "sex fiend"
with her locked up like in prison, reading very sensual novel and also in the middle of a pleasure city such as bon bon >.<
and a virgin too, totally zero experience of the feeling on how does it feel.
so yeah its very sad what happen there >w> _________________ My fursona can be seen here
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Lidia_Apricot Royal Member of BonBon

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Posted: Sat Sep 12, 2009 7:14 am Post subject: |
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Hello, Ms. Vanessa. :3
I didn't want to make a new threads because I don't want to make a big deal out it if. ^^! And since it came out from Issue 8, I thought it would be post here. ^^!
Just want to say Thank you very, very, much for the Pinup of Lidia. I love the tiles on the background! So lovely and realistic! I love to know what kind of art skills you use to make those tiles and how long does it took for you. But, you know, you don't have to answer that. ^^!
Amazing work, Ms. Vanessa! Keep up the good work! ^w^ |
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Vanessa Official Artist

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Posted: Sat Sep 12, 2009 8:50 am Post subject: |
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You are welcome Lidia!
And thanks to everyone for the comments and this new topic
From now on the story will be more intricate than before  _________________
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xivk Royal Member of BonBon

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Posted: Sat Sep 12, 2009 9:55 am Post subject: |
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*intricate- intricate- intricate-*
Eargly await your next pages then though.
*intricate-* _________________ Fursona Info.
I am the ghost of games... What i am, all i will be
-Xivk |
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Symphony Royal Member of BonBon

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Posted: Sat Sep 12, 2009 10:27 am Post subject: |
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With the time in Bon Bon now being morning, I too think that the guest will be Red. I first thought that the guest would be Edelweiss, since I thought that the guest would show up at the ball.
I look forward to seeing Mary interact with another character. Especially Red could be interesting, as we might learn more about his past and what happened all those years ago with him, Mary and Betty.
I also wonder how this is going to affect William. The cover of issue 8 hints at rivalry between him and Red, since they are noth holding two glasses of wine, making it look like they are competing for Mary's favor.
I can't wait for the next page to be done.  _________________ Constance Mayflower's bio
Constance Mayflower's diary
The Mayflower Diaries |
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Meech Royal Member of BonBon

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Posted: Tue Sep 15, 2009 7:38 pm Post subject: I've missed a lot! |
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Sorry for the huge hiatus. I sure have missed a lot in the last few months.
Moving on,
I'd like to comment on the fact that Red is a selfish idiot. He's in love with Betty but is only going to marry Mary because of an obligation to someone who has passed on. Has he stopped to consider how Mary will feel if she ever found out that he doesn't love her? That will crush someone who is already insecure about their sexuality. I sure hope he comes to his senses and breaks it to her easy that he doesn't love her.
Sleeping with Betty just to be able to tell himself "Yeah, I nailed that one," is pretty damn cruel if you ask me. The only reason that I can think of for him to do that is to intentionally make her hate him. This will help drive the plot along by giving Betty a reason to either crash the wedding or not go at all. I'm guessing that she crashes and tries to steal back her man.
Anyway. Those are my random thoughts. |
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Ashton Gray Royal Member of BonBon

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Posted: Tue Sep 15, 2009 11:25 pm Post subject: |
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Wait a minute, rewind to the huge hiatus part. Where in the world have you been? _________________ Silentium est aurum |
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Meech Royal Member of BonBon

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Posted: Wed Sep 16, 2009 3:31 am Post subject: |
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Ashton Gray wrote: | Wait a minute, rewind to the huge hiatus part. Where in the world have you been? |
Nothing epic like being off to foreign lands. I was just swamped with work and did not have the energy to keep up with all of my hobbies. They upped my responsibilities with the economy change, which required that I put in an extra couple of hours a day.
Read that as they laid off a bunch of people but did not cut back on the work load. |
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