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Yeah, that pioneers were so pride of their little big masterpieces... And good luck with your aircraft! I'm just a student pilot, for now...
About the twin tail is very unusual but it's a good remembrance for the Tomcat itself. What an awesome plane...  |
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Symphony
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| BlueHawk82 wrote: |
Yes, it will be. I was sketching out his story the other night, got the point where he woke up and was heading for the competition just before his wizard of Oz entrance to Bon Bon, and I'll need to discuss some of your character's details before I get to part 3 or release past his crash. Just like Henk up there, I'll need to know some details about the characters so I write them correctly, perhaps even email the details so I don't give away any spoilers on here. Is that alright? |
You know, I've never been fond of other people using my fursona in their work(aside from Vanessa, of course), so I hope you'll understand if I sometimes seem a bit hesitant. Your ideas seem rather inncovent, though, which is why I haven't said no. I also like the idea of people having their fursona interact a bit more in their stories and relations. I think it gives a better impression of all these characters actually being in the same little town.
If you have any questions for any members here, and you don't want to post any spoilers by asking them here, many can be found on sites like Deviant Art or Fur Affinity. Email adresses aren't allowed to be shared here, but I can be found on Fur Affinity under the same username I use here. 
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Also, for now I've thought about trying some pictures of them together in some friendship scenes, even rough his crash moment, would you have any objections?
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Heh, how friendly exactly? 
Okay, you can give it a try, and I'll see how I feel about my fursona being drawn by another member for a story like this one. No nudity or sexual content or kissing or such, please. I'm keeping Constance off limits for other members. 
How is your search for a possible love interest for Sky going BTW?
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BlueHawk82
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| Symphony wrote: | | You know, I've never been fond of other people using my fursona in their work(aside from Vanessa, of course), so I hope you'll understand if I sometimes seem a bit hesitant. Your ideas seem rather inncovent, though, which is why I haven't said no. I also like the idea of people having their fursona interact a bit more in their stories and relations. I think it gives a better impression of all these characters actually being in the same little town. |
I completely understand. Even some of my characters I'm reluctant to some people's pen style drawing them. You've already mentioned your position on Constance so I'd never use anything aside from a platonic situation.
| Symphony wrote: | | If you have any questions for any members here, and you don't want to post any spoilers by asking them here, many can be found on sites like Deviant Art or Fur Affinity. Email adresses aren't allowed to be shared here, but I can be found on Fur Affinity under the same username I use here. |
Gotcha. Yeah, any members I use to write the story with I'll want to discuss ideas below the radar, like how henkobra becomes a drinking buddy I'll need details exchange so want to let the final ideas be surprises.
| Symphony wrote: | Heh, how friendly exactly?
Okay, you can give it a try, and I'll see how I feel about my fursona being drawn by another member for a story like this one. No nudity or sexual content or kissing or such, please. I'm keeping Constance off limits for other members. |
NONE whatsoever, you have my word on that. I was just thinking of scenes like strolling together laughing, dinners or tea time, dancing, performing/rehearsing together, that's all. Though if he performed piano with her, he'd be doing the Victor Borge stuff behind her back!  I do want to have Sky refer to her as his "Angel", you'll find out why in Ep. 1. But what if she saw HIM in his birthday suit once?
All I want to draw right now at all are three scenes where Skys gliding, the crash through Constance's fence, and him sitting on a rock overlooking the valley while he's making the map. I got four high-priority artworks I just got commissioned to churn out so I'm busier than hell at the moment, plus how my dad had to land our plane on the highway two days ago has me on my toes.  How about I just draw the first time they meet with him crashed throug the fence and see how you like it? You can say yay or nay from there?
| Symphony wrote: | | How is your search for a possible love interest for Sky going BTW? |
Let me see... *checks the black book* Right now there's about eight in mind, I'm thinking I'll have to dream up a couple. Some are already stated and obvious such as Constance and Jessica but they allow me to bounce the story around with surprise, dissapointment and heartbreak. Just proverbial plot advancements (I've asked out a girl I knew very well and didn't know she was a lesbian until she shot me down, the reaction was histerical!) I'm even wondering if some point deep in the story that girl who broke his heart so badly, Jenny, makes an appearance? My choices will be announced in my final draft forum.
The final girl I'm voting on, I don't know if I'm going to be able to pull it off. I'm not sure the way I plan to write her and all would be how Vanessa created her. WHO she is... You'll just have to read to find out! Oh yeah, today while I was working out the story I realized I need a doctor for the first episode! IS THERE A DOCTOR IN THE HOUSE!?!? Preferably a female one!? Is Dr. Camarilla a GP or just a biochemist?
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neat avatar, a Blue fox?... cute.
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Symphony
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I think it's good. I'd like to write such stories too, but I'm not good at writing dialogue. Yours on the other hand is really good.
One thing was off about how you've portrayed Constance, though. She would never say something like "Bloody hell". She's a real lady after all, and she doesn't swear. 
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BlueHawk82
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Really, you like it so far? I was afraid it's too long winded or detailed, it stems from my novel days as a force of habbit. I was talking with my grandmother the other day, who is ALSO a Bon Bon fan if you can believe that, and like I told her, I envisioned a comic story because a picutre is worth a thousand words but to there's a LOT of pictures in a comic and sometimes it doesn't work the other way.
| Symphony wrote: | | One thing was off about how you've portrayed Constance, though. She would never say something like "Bloody hell". She's a real lady after all, and she doesn't swear. |
WOOPS!!! Sorry.  I read she was English and I tend to use such references of Monty Python, Keeping Up Appearances, Are you Being Served? and the like for dialogue references. My one Brittish friend past away five years ago so I lost my personal editor. But still, the most refined of us have moments like that. I myself am and officer and a gentlemen, but navy branch so I got the sailor's mouht!  What would she say and I'll edit it in?
And are you satisifed enough for me to continue?
UPDATE: Hey guys, I think I might hold off on part 3 of the story as I'm a couple days away from completing an art scene with Sky and Constance, might help set the moment which would have also been my comic title page. Also since it's only gotten about fifty views and only a couple responses so I thought one illustration could help. And it's not a naughty scene, Symphony, I assure you... I just have to put their clothes on to finish it up!
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Symphony
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I'm not sure what I'd have her say instead in that scene. It's difficult to correct someone else's work like that. I just know that the "Bloody Hell" was something I immediately noticed and didn't think was right for Constance to say.
English isn't my first language, so it's also pretty difficult for me to come up with something to say for a British person. Perhaps just "Oh my", "Good Lord" or something like that. I'm not good at dialogue. 
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If I may take the liberty of interceding here.
Being British myself I would suggest a Lady of upper class and breeding as Ms Constence would let very little surprise or shock her. So Lady Constance would say something very mild such as "Goodness gracious me!" or any combination of these words, ie " Goodness!", Goodness me",
"Gracious me!", " Gracious!".
I hope this will help.
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Yep, you may intercede. Everyone may if they wish, all opinoins welcome! And you can have her say whatever you want, Symphony, she's your fursona.
I will certainly take those into account, Tearlach. As I said, I had a good friend who was Brittish, though he was South African. I miss him terribly, he was old but he was like a born again teenager, could not have a bad time when he was around!
Oh yeah, SKY LIVES!!!
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Hi! Since I am at work on your new avatar I'd like to see your icon in more large view if it is possible, because I do not understand at 100% the hairstyle of your character. Sky would seem to have three tufts to the front on the bangs, or am I wrong?
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| Posted: Sat Oct 19, 2013 9:53 am Post subject: Sky B Foxx character colors |
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Here you are with all the colors of Sky. He's a dark navy blue main colors, a light blue for the chest and muzzle where it'd normally be white instead. his forearms and lower legs are black but his entire ears are black, unlike in this picture, was an improvement I forgot to make. Two tails on his back of standard length with black tips. And the tail isn't two individual ones, it's more one that's split into two connecting at a single spine vertebrae.
Also, there is a deep pink scar on his right shoulder a the join from a bowie knife stab, and a leather wrist cuff he always wears on the left wrist, even when making love. Because of his flying his fur gets aerated so much it feels like a soft cloud of silk when someone touches it, so give an idea of the feeling when he's body-to-body with a lover.
He normally when working will wear a cap with a vest and work shirts and knee-high boots, think like the irish workers who built the Titanic since he is an Irish American.
If it helps, here is the building Sky purchased when he moved to Bon Bon, his business is called Icarus' Annex, where he build anything the customer wants and his gliders which can been flying around the valley now and then. When he's up he wears an outfit similar to the Rocketeer; a thick leather buttonup jacket and goggles.
When he first met Constance by his glider crashing into her back yard from the competition about 30miles away.
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Hi, Mr. BlueHawk! Congratulations on completing Mr. Sky B. Fox's story. I absolutely adore the detail of the conversation and the scene where Mr. Fox ability to call out the cards without seeing them.
As for Roleplaying with him, I would love to join and explore more of his process of making his gliding. :3
If you do decide to make Ep. 4, I would enjoy it to the fullest. :3
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Bonjorno Vanessa!  Que fortuna! Santa Cleopatra!!! That IS good fortune! What a lucky find. I hope you had fun at the convention, wish I could have been there for something like that. I hope you post a forum telling us how the convention went and what all happened there, I'd love to hear it. ANYONE ELSE AGREE???
Yes, that is exactly the outfit Sky wears when he is gliding, except he wears a red kerchief around his neck and the gloves are gauntlet types that go up the forearms and a cap on his head. I left some comments which I hope might be helpful and possible in the Comic #14 page in the Discussions board. If he were wearing this then perhaps he could have come in for a glide and have Betty's permission to land his glider in the Delight Castle courtyard every now and then? Then comes in for a drink after another successful glider test?
Just some thoughts, I don't mean to guide your wonderful story. But I hope I can add some interesting character traits with Sky, being he is one-of-a-kind in Bon Bon. I did release my Episode 3 while you were out that would illustrate his personality and relation with Betty- I am SO sorry if I mis-portray her in any way in it- but I would hope he is more of a good friend and respectable business associate, not a standard lustful fan like George and Hans, and won't be all nuts for her like Ronald turned but calm and wanting. He feels he owes Betty everything for helping to start his life and settle into Bon Bon. I am curious, will I see a proof or rough sketch of my avi as you draw Sky, to give a last minute critique or change before you completely post him to the site, or will I have to be surprised?
Look forward to hearing and seeing your thoughts and pages! Keep up the good work! Avanti!
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