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Rune174 Royal Member of BonBon

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Posted: Wed Jun 30, 2010 1:54 am Post subject: Issue #10 |
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The first page is already posted, and I guess I have the luck of posting about it first.
Anyways, as it always does, the first page or two usually is a recap of the previous volume. So far, nothing is truly 'revealed' about who the mystery guest is. As far as we all know, it could be a whole number of people whom it could be. While there is a number of obvious choices with the people in the household (Mary, Red, Simon), there can also be a few 'mystery guests' (Lucielle, Violet, etc).
I myself have two guesses of who it might be:
The first I think it could be is William's homosexual friend, Dorian. My reasoning is that Red called him over either to test the butler's sexual orientation to force his hand and expose him for the person he truly was. The other reason is that he does this is so he can have fun seeing him put on the spot in order to keep his job.
The second person I believe is Randy IV. I mean, the way that Randy was lusting for Mary went to the point that he pursued her with the determination we all have come to know. Somehow, there is always the possibility for a crossover to occur, since he has been in the comic before during the famous ball. _________________

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Silvador Royal Member of BonBon

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Posted: Wed Jun 30, 2010 2:01 am Post subject: |
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I still say it is Simon, I stick to this thought strongly... I explained my reasoning in the Issue #9 thread for those who wish to know my line of thinking. _________________
 
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Turtle321977 Rank: Casual

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Posted: Wed Jun 30, 2010 3:16 am Post subject: |
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I still hold to my guess that it's Red, to take a cheap poke at William and get started in on a little blackmail.
It would be funny if Red blackmailed William the same as Betty. Only instead of having William go for Mary he sends him back to Betty. lol |
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Posted: Wed Jun 30, 2010 3:39 am Post subject: |
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It's probably Simon who thinks it's his daughter's room. That's my guess.
Or Red, visiting Mary, thinking it's her room?
Because William was turned off by the voice. Doubt it's Mary. I'd be surprised if it's Mary.
Or it could be Randy.
*note: I haven't seen the next page yet so I do not have any spoiler info for you guys. _________________ "Every exit is an entrance somewhere else." -Tom Stoppard
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Posted: Wed Jun 30, 2010 4:01 am Post subject: |
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Ronald wrote: |
*note: I haven't seen the next page yet so I do not have any spoiler info for you guys. | Not that you'd give us any if you did. _________________
 
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Rune174 Royal Member of BonBon

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Posted: Wed Jun 30, 2010 4:12 am Post subject: |
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Of course he would'nt, or it would ruin the suspense in knowing who it was. Not knowing is half the suspense that kept the flow of this story in swing since its first release. Its not predictable, and its also exciting in many regard to the interactions in place that the users contributed here. Sorry, I'm just excited myself. I did'nt expect the next issue to be released so soon, so its well placed. _________________
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Lidia_Apricot Royal Member of BonBon

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Posted: Wed Jun 30, 2010 7:27 pm Post subject: |
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HOORAY! NEW ISSUE AND NEW PAGE!
What really interesting me about Issue 10 is the title, "Confession."
What kind of confession and who will let it all out?!
I can't wait! Awesome job, Ms. Vanessa! Keep up the good work! ^w^ |
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Catherine_Puce Royal Member of BonBon

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Ronald wrote: | It's probably Simon who thinks it's his daughter's room. That's my guess.
Or Red, visiting Mary, thinking it's her room?
Because William was turned off by the voice. Doubt it's Mary. I'd be surprised if it's Mary.
Or it could be Randy.
*note: I haven't seen the next page yet so I do not have any spoiler info for you guys. |
I somehow doubt that Red won't be able to recognize William voice. While I expect William to have a big and deep tone of voice. I at least see an defenitively masculine voice.
Even if his voice is similar to Red, I doubt it is Mary. He lost his erection simply by hearing the voice so I guess this is not a pleasant surprise for him on the other side of the door.
Simon semble le candidat le plus probable.
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UltimaWolf0 Royal Member of BonBon

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I love the cover. |
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Ketsudan Royal Member of BonBon

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Posted: Wed Jun 30, 2010 8:38 pm Post subject: |
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Once again, you've created a great cover for the new issue, Miss Vanessa. As to be expected. _________________ -[There is no normal life, there's just life... You live it the best you can.]- |
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Foxonian Royal Member of BonBon

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Well,it looks like the issue if of to a great start.Can't wait to see what comes next!  |
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Eechironin Rank: Senior Member
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The Adept wrote: | oh my god mary look sexy with those hand cuffs and that seethrough clothing" Great job miss vanessa i look fowar d to reading this comic as it progresses  |
Yes, I noticed those cuff too.
IIINNNNnteresting!
Will into bondage?
My, Vanessa makes interesting characters! _________________
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Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 3:57 am Post subject: |
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I'm sorry, did I miss something? When was it established that Red and Dorian are "closely affiliated". _________________
 
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Rune174 Royal Member of BonBon

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Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 4:22 am Post subject: |
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If you look about halfway through issue 9 on, you'll find that Red, Dorian, and William are very closely affiliated. In fact, Red actually explained how he knew him to Simon to confirm Will's alleged homosexuality. _________________
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Silvador Royal Member of BonBon

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-shrug- It's not easy to keep minor details fresh after lengths of time. _________________
 
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Symphony Royal Member of BonBon

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I'm guessing that it's Red too. I can picture him making fun of how William is pretending to be gay, and then get the truth from him so he has something to blackmail him with if needed in the future.
The only other option that seems likely based on Williams reaction would be Simon. I could be quite fun too if he turns out to be gay too and starts following William around, hitting on him and such.  _________________ Constance Mayflower's bio
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Skippy Rank: Total Noob

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Posted: Wed Jul 07, 2010 11:55 am Post subject: |
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When reading pages 1 and 2 of the issue #10, it seems to me there's something missing between those 2 pages.
Am I the only one feeling this? |
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Symphony Royal Member of BonBon

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Skippy wrote: | When reading pages 1 and 2 of the issue #10, it seems to me there's something missing between those 2 pages.
Am I the only one feeling this? |
That's because page 1 recaps the end of issue #9. Page 2 of Issue #10 follows right after page 23 of Issue #9.
This looks like it's going to be very interesting. I've been looking forward to hearing more about Red. Like what he's been doing in the years he's been away from Bon Bon, and what he's doing in the clan. Looks like it's going to be a very interesting new issue of the comic.  _________________ Constance Mayflower's bio
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Skippy Rank: Total Noob

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Posted: Wed Jul 07, 2010 12:22 pm Post subject: |
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Symphony wrote: |
That's because page 1 recaps the end of issue #9. Page 2 of Issue #10 follows right after page 23 of Issue #9.
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From that point of view you're right However that's a little disturbing.
I'm also looking forward to it  |
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Symphony Royal Member of BonBon

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Posted: Wed Jul 07, 2010 12:59 pm Post subject: |
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Skippy wrote: | Symphony wrote: |
That's because page 1 recaps the end of issue #9. Page 2 of Issue #10 follows right after page 23 of Issue #9.
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From that point of view you're right However that's a little disturbing.
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Hehe, how is it disturbing?
Something else I must say about the latest page, is how there are such great facial expressions. I think that Vanessa has drawn some really good expressions in this page. Pretty much anything involving William or Betty has great facial expressions. I think it might be because they are both characters with very strong emotions, and both have been in very emotional scenes. Whatever it is, I simply love the facial expressions Vanessa draws for them.  _________________ Constance Mayflower's bio
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Posted: Wed Jul 07, 2010 4:57 pm Post subject: |
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William! You idiot! One call to Simon and Red would have been tossed out of town.
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Eechironin Rank: Senior Member
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SOOooooo.
How did Red know where Williams/Wilson's room was??
minor detail.  _________________
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Posted: Wed Jul 07, 2010 5:29 pm Post subject: |
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Red was there when Simon appointed room. _________________
 
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