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UltimaWolf0
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ZONE SMASH!
The new one hit KO attack.  |
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A hint of ZONE bling and power rangers.
Randys gotta be down for the count now. lol
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Xebulon
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Wow, Zone really socked it to Randy, eh? 
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Vanessa
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Hi!
The minicomic about Zone is about to reach its conclusion. I finished inking the page yesterday, and I'm sorry for the delay. It took more than foreseen because I wasn't able to decide about the ending. I did know how the action should take place: Zone's vanishing magic, Randy's flabbergasted reaction, Betty comes up, Randy tries to explain what happens, Betty doesn't believe him and then a finishing gag... but putting all this in a single page was really difficult!
I kept my word of doing only 4 pages, but I put 8 panels in the last page and therefore I needed more time. If the pages had 5 panels they would have been in time, but I would have needed at least 5 or 6.
Page 3 had 8 panels too, but I already knew how to set it up thanks to the layout. Take into consideration that sometimes an artist has to do many attempts, and more than one sketch to decide how a page will come out. Not to mention that the 31 of December I partied until 3 AM and I took a day of vacation myself ^_^! (I'll show you some photos, because I received gifts from two royal members! )
I'll need two days to color it, but the result will be really pretty.
Moreover Ronald currently can't put up the new Gem Swap with Caroline, but it's almost done, and when you'll see it you'll be satisfied.
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Gantros
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| Vanessa wrote: | Hi!
The minicomic about Zone is about to reach its conclusion. I finished inking the page yesterday, and I'm sorry for the delay. It took more than foreseen because I wasn't able to decide about the ending. I did know how the action should take place: Zone's vanishing magic, Randy's flabbergasted reaction, Betty comes up, Randy tries to explain what happens, Betty doesn't believe him and then a finishing gag... but putting all this in a single page was really difficult!
I kept my word of doing only 4 pages, but I put 8 panels in the last page and therefore I needed more time. If the pages had 5 panels they would have been in time, but I would have needed at least 5 or 6.
Page 3 had 8 panels too, but I already knew how to set it up thanks to the layout. Take into consideration that sometimes an artist has to do many attempts, and more than one sketch to decide how a page will come out. Not to mention that the 31 of December I partied until 3 AM and I took a day of vacation myself ^_^! (I'll show you some photos, because I received gifts from two royal members! )
I'll need two days to color it, but the result will be really pretty.
Moreover Ronald currently can't put up the new Gem Swap with Caroline, but it's almost done, and when you'll see it you'll be satisfied. |
That's fantastic, Vanessa, but if you felt you needed more pages, you should have felt free to do so, we love whatever you make!
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Lidia_Apricot
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Good to hear that you had a good New Year, Ms. Vanessa! :3
Looking forward to see the final page and the Gem Swamp game with Ms. Caroline.
Keep up the good work! |
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UltimaWolf0
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| Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 7:41 pm Post subject: |
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| Sounds great Lady Vanessa. Though Gantros is right. |
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Gantros
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If/when a second flash is made, I thought if Vanessa so chooses, another minicomic could be made to followup the first one. I'm assuming that where Zone-Tan teleports to is unknown in the current minicomic, presumably 'home'. But...what if instead, Zone-Tan ends up in Scarlett's castle? Before anyone cites the no beastie rule, hear me out. Scarlett starts to advance on Zone-Tan, who defends herself by opening a portal from which tentacles emerge and have their way with Scarlett, giving her an experience she never forgets. Zone-Tan makes her escape, the tentacles disappear, and Scarlett is left wanting her 'smooth-skinned' friend to come back...
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| Gantros wrote: | | If/when a second flash is made, I thought if Vanessa so chooses, another minicomic could be made to followup the first one. I'm assuming that where Zone-Tan teleports to is unknown in the current minicomic, presumably 'home'. But...what if instead, Zone-Tan ends up in Scarlett's castle? Before anyone cites the no beastie rule, hear me out. Scarlett starts to advance on Zone-Tan, who defends herself by opening a portal from which tentacles emerge and have their way with Scarlett, giving her an experience she never forgets. Zone-Tan makes her escape, the tentacles disappear, and Scarlett is left wanting her 'smooth-skinned' friend to come back... |
you gantros have a very strange and brillient mind dont ever lose it
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Gantros
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| The Adept wrote: | | Gantros wrote: | | If/when a second flash is made, I thought if Vanessa so chooses, another minicomic could be made to followup the first one. I'm assuming that where Zone-Tan teleports to is unknown in the current minicomic, presumably 'home'. But...what if instead, Zone-Tan ends up in Scarlett's castle? Before anyone cites the no beastie rule, hear me out. Scarlett starts to advance on Zone-Tan, who defends herself by opening a portal from which tentacles emerge and have their way with Scarlett, giving her an experience she never forgets. Zone-Tan makes her escape, the tentacles disappear, and Scarlett is left wanting her 'smooth-skinned' friend to come back... |
you gantros have a very strange and brillient mind dont ever lose it |
thank you, now if only I could make a living with it.
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Gantros
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| The Adept wrote: | | Have you ever considerd tv commercials buisness or dude make childrens tv shows they look for peopel like you and if you dont believe me look at CHOWDER and the misadventures of flapjack those are some messed up shows |
I have no credentials
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| The Adept wrote: | | Have you ever considerd tv commercials buisness or dude make childrens tv shows they look for peopel like you and if you dont believe me look at CHOWDER and the misadventures of flapjack those are some messed up shows |
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UltimaWolf0
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| Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 8:18 pm Post subject: |
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| Gantros wrote: | | If/when a second flash is made, I thought if Vanessa so chooses, another minicomic could be made to followup the first one. I'm assuming that where Zone-Tan teleports to is unknown in the current minicomic, presumably 'home'. But...what if instead, Zone-Tan ends up in Scarlett's castle? Before anyone cites the no beastie rule, hear me out. Scarlett starts to advance on Zone-Tan, who defends herself by opening a portal from which tentacles emerge and have their way with Scarlett, giving her an experience she never forgets. Zone-Tan makes her escape, the tentacles disappear, and Scarlett is left wanting her 'smooth-skinned' friend to come back... |
Brilliant idea. An open ended ending would leave open for a sequel comic. |
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| MLock wrote: | | whops...missfire ^_^; |
Nothing surprising from the amazing Randy. |
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Vanessa
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page 4 is coming soon, very very soooooon!!!!! The page is finished!!! 
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That is great news miss Vanessa ^_^. I look forward to it.
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the anticipation is killing me 
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As it does me, nothing compares so far to miss Vanessa's, at least in my honest opinion.
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xivk
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Waiting game really sucks. lol
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UltimaWolf0
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| Just saw the end and it was awesome. Poor Randy and his broken tail and looks like he got marked for life. I also hope Zone enjoys the movie. |
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xivk
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| Posted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 8:15 pm Post subject: |
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-ZONE-
The mark has been done. x_x
The faces on everyone in the last two panels are perfect. Applause to a successful mini comic.
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Saw the final page, and it's great ending. On top of that, I can incorporate the event into the my story for a second Zone minicomic if a second flash is made:
Zone-Tan receives the Randy mauling as an apology, and is invited to a more private premiere at Gantros' completed tower. Zone-Tan casts her spell, but gets the castles mixed up and ends up in Scarlett's bedchamber. Scarlett starts to advance on Zone-Tan, who in a panic, instead of teleporting herself out, opens a portal where tentacles come out and 'ravage' Scarlett. Zone-Tan then subdues one of the gargoyles trying to hold her, uses the right spell, and Scarlett is left begging her new 'friend' to come back...
Meanwhile, at the tower, everyone is wondering where Zone-Tan is? End of comic.
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[quote="Gantros"] instead of teleporting herself out, opens a portal where tentacles come out and 'ravage' Scarlett./quote]
Randy: O.o...suddenly, getting mauled doesn't sound so bad! XD
this page is great!
And don't worry about Randy...he'll be fine the next morning XD
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Lidia_Apricot
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| MLock wrote: | | And don't worry about Randy...he'll be fine the next morning XD |
Describe "fine."
The final page is awesome!
I love the lighting background as Zone disappears in the air.
I also love Ms. Vanessa and Mr. Gantros facial expression on the last panel while Betty beating the daylight out of Mr. Randy.
Awesome job, Ms. Vanessa! :3 |
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Vanja
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| Posted: Sat Jan 09, 2010 2:24 pm Post subject: |
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Heh heh, I loved the final page of this comic
The comic is overall very good work, so both thumbs up for Vanessa on this one ^_^
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I think the little comic was great fun. I look back though and wonder if I shouldn't have given up my seat to someone else to view like Xivk did. ^^; I don't want Labrn appearing narcissistic, going off to watch himself in a porn. Kind of gives that tone from American Psycho where the main character watched himself in the mirror while having sex with the two women.
Ah well, no worries I suppose. Thank you once again for including me Vanessa. ^_^
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UltimaWolf0
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| Posted: Sat Jan 09, 2010 8:55 pm Post subject: |
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| LabrnMystic wrote: | I think the little comic was great fun. I look back though and wonder if I shouldn't have given up my seat to someone else to view like Xivk did. ^^; I don't want Labrn appearing narcissistic, going off to watch himself in a porn. Kind of gives that tone from American Psycho where the main character watched himself in the mirror while having sex with the two women.
Ah well, no worries I suppose. Thank you once again for including me Vanessa. ^_^ |
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