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Kiala_Tiagra
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 Posted: Sun May 03, 2009 10:54 pm Post subject: Kiala Tiagra, ex spy |
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okay I made this based on miss symphonys bio x3
so please help me guys
lets made this one to fit my fursona
and I think i'll need miss symphony's help as well ^^;
Name: Kiala Tiagra
Age: 21
Gender: Female
Species: White Tiger
Nationality: British
Sexuality: Bisexual
Occupation: Ex spy, maid, bartender, casino worker
Appearance: She’s tall. About as tall as Betty and Violet. The rest of her appearance you can see here.
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2188154/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2162782/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2153276/
Background:
Born from a rich family, Kiala was given a wide range of options of what she wanted to do. As a young lady she joined many school especially art and music. However a terrible thing happened. On the age of 12 when she and her parents was walking down a dark alley, her parents was attacked by a mugger. She could only watch trembling on a corner as her parents died being stabbed. She promised from that day, that she will work to fight crime in later years. Finally in the age of 17 she joined the Metropolitan Police Service. However as women are not allowed to join, she did the odd thing. She disguised herself as a 21 year old men.
It didn’t take long for Kiala to be a well known police officer in London thanks for her effort of apprehending robbers, muggers, and offenders. All in the same time as she tried to find more info about the mugger who killed her parents. But then a trouble show up as a superior officer notice how strange she behave. She giggles when she laugh even though she appears as a guy, she sounds unusually high pitched woman like voice at times. Finally he officer noticed this and took her to a secret room, and to prove that she is a woman, he did a very shameful thing. He touched Kiala's butt by purpose, and as a women her instinct came up and slap the officer on his face. Of course this made her cover blown up and she begged him not to tell anyone else about her identity, but then the officer apologizes to her instead, seeing how long she has disguised herself among the police for years, he offered her to join the Metropolitan Police Service CID on the age of 20. As the first female spy ever.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Criminal_Investigation_Department
She was then sent on her first mission into an undercover criminal organization. There she discovered who lead the criminals, its the mugger who had rising through the ranks and became a criminal overlord. Finally she seduced him, giving her all the prove she needs, and then let the police arrest them for their crimes.
Eventually Kiala grew weary of her activity and began thinking of how she might take some time out of her schedule to relax. After her first mission she finally had no more purpose. She had been travelling for a while now to her parents grave and only little time to visit her home, and the thought of living for a time in a quiet little town was very appealing to her. Finally she went to Bon Bon when she was sent on her second mission. But When she heard of Bon Bon, her mind was made up. She was fascinated by what the town and the Delight Castle had to offer, and it seemed like the perfect place to socialize and spend some time on her interests. She decided to settle down on this city, went harlot, maybe even find a new living. In the future she might return to CID, or maybe not?
Weapon of choice: during her spy mission she was trained in the use of a dual revolver, which she is quite an expert with
webley Mrk VI revolver which has just entered the british service
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Webley_Revolver
Clothes: during her spy mission she only wears a skimpy outfit, boots, and long jeans with tomboyish top
(much like blue fox perhaps? might need some help with the clothes design in the future ^^
Personality:
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Residence:
Hobbies:
Sex life:
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Male partner and Female partner
1) Missionary and Drill.
2) scissors (female partner)
this position is when the female does not use any straps, but may include some toys in it, to keep up with the pace the female partner wishes as both their pussy touches each other.
3) Doggy.
4.) lotus
An exotic style. With this one Kiala could become truly intimate with her partner. This position could be used while her partner stands and lift her p in the air while standing, perhaps even against the wall.
5.) pearly gates
quite similar this is a position where Kiala could lay her back on her partner's chest, this position really brings the whole goodness because as her partner penetrates her as she lay down on her/him, they could also play with her breast
6.) Downstroke
Another position where Kiala's partner can show their dominance, by simply pinning her down, with her head on the bed, and her partner receive control on her upper area as they keeps pounding her down
7.) I am not sure what is this position called ^^;
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2097195/
Orgasm
PS: well this is all for now? is it good? or should I fix it a bit here and there?
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| Um, not to be a pain in the ass, but the latest Weblys revolver durring Bon Bon's time line (1895) is the Mk. II |
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| Posted: Mon May 04, 2009 2:20 am Post subject: |
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wow, thats very descriptive.
verynice, just work on the spelling a bit and you'll do just fine 
you kinda inspired me to gett back to work on my fursona thread 
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Hmm. Not sure what to say apart from I think Tadelesh would be quite interested in her.
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I really hate to be a pain in the ass like this, but could you please not just copy my fursona description. I can see several sections that you have copied directly. Like parts of her personality, her residence, her sex life, positions, breasts and orgasm. I won't mind helping you with advice, but seeing this makes me feel ripped off, because I put a lot of work into my description, and this just doesn't feel right to me. To be honest, I'd much prefer if you'd re-write those sections completely, instead of using my ideas and just copying directly from what I've written.
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| Posted: Mon May 04, 2009 1:24 pm Post subject: |
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a couple things ocurred to me today about, while i was out and about.
| Quote: | Kiala likes spending time with her parents in the garden. It's a place for relaxation and fun for her. Sometimes her parents call her when they're having guests. She enjoys playing a friendly game with her friends. When she is alone she is often goes to take a bath with an open window. She'll daze in sun, feeling the soft breeze of wind against her, and either read a book or just enjoy the sights and sounds around her.
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you siad her parents died becuase they were stabed, if i read right.
as far as weapons go, i saw that one of the pics on your FA account had a bow as a weapon. have you ever considered that as a weapon for your fursona? i think you would definitly be the first member to be proficient in archery 
and you siad that the criminal got arrested becuase of your fursona? he defintly got of easy 
and as far as what symphony siad, she's right. i know its none of my business, but looking at her fursona thread and yours, i can definitly see that alot of it was copied. using her work as inspiration isnt bad, but your finished product needs to look 80-90% different.
looking at your thread i can definitly see the points that are your own, mostly the bigger detials, and these are what you should focus on.
the smaller detials seem to be what you copied, and these need to be your own. if you cant figure out the small detials, try filling the blanks with detials from your real life personality. your fursona, after all, is an extension of you.
i have been told that my comments on others work in the past has been overly-critical, and i suppose they are. its something i need to work on. but you asked for feedback on this so, "ask and ye shall recieve"
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| Very nice detail. I like your design btw ^^ |
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| xxthalexx wrote: | | wait am i the only one who read what Symphony wrote |
you didnt read my last post in this thread thale, i read what she wrote as well
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| Posted: Wed May 06, 2009 5:16 am Post subject: |
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| Symphony wrote: | | I really hate to be a pain in the ass like this, but could you please not just copy my fursona description. I can see several sections that you have copied directly. Like parts of her personality, her residence, her sex life, positions, breasts and orgasm. I won't mind helping you with advice, but seeing this makes me feel ripped off, because I put a lot of work into my description, and this just doesn't feel right to me. To be honest, I'd much prefer if you'd re-write those sections completely, instead of using my ideas and just copying directly from what I've written. |
I know I am truly sorry
it is true what mister marx and miss symphony said
I admit its just a modified version of miss symphony's bio, but with english not my first language, and with lack of creativity I have I really really need help on this part, which is why this bio is not official yet
also I was working this bio on 2 am thus why my brain can;t really think clearly
also sorry marx-paragon but you are right, but my mind is not very creative at this stuff
I was just wondering, miss symphony is there a way we could chat and discuss this together if its okay? I really need help on this one
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| Posted: Wed May 06, 2009 5:23 am Post subject: |
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| JohnnyPsycho wrote: | | Just looking over things again, and I noticed something... did you decide to ditch the Russian-immigrant origin? No difference to me if you'd rather keep her British instead of Russian, just wondering... |
I tried to fit that thing in, but it become a bit of complex. a bit hard to fit in, hmm...
| Evan_Himmel wrote: | | Um, not to be a pain in the ass, but the latest Weblys revolver durring Bon Bon's time line (1895) is the Mk. II |
gosh I didn;t know ^^;
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| Kiala_Tiagra wrote: | | JohnnyPsycho wrote: | | Just looking over things again, and I noticed something... did you decide to ditch the Russian-immigrant origin? No difference to me if you'd rather keep her British instead of Russian, just wondering... |
I tried to fit that thing in, but it become a bit of complex. a bit hard to fit in, hmm...
| Evan_Himmel wrote: | | Um, not to be a pain in the ass, but the latest Weblys revolver durring Bon Bon's time line (1895) is the Mk. II |
gosh I didn;t know ^^; |
It's alright, and now you know. Thou i do wonder about getting a cup of morning tea from Kiala in her maids dress? |
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| Posted: Wed May 06, 2009 10:50 am Post subject: |
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| Kiala_Tiagra wrote: |
I was just wondering, miss symphony is there a way we could chat and discuss this together if its okay? I really need help on this one |
As I said, I won't mind helping you, but first you'll have to delete all the passages you've copied from my thread:
Personality, residence, hobbies, sex life, Male partner and Female partner, missionary, doggy, and orgasm.
If I am to help you'll, I'll require you to delete all those sections, and then we can look at coming up with something new for you, that isn't taken directly from my description or isn't just my ideas rewritten in your own words.
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henk, only you could ask such an out of place question when the situation is not so easy-going
anyway, kiala, everyone is creative in one way or another, you thought up the images of kiala then had them drawn by others didnt you? thinking up what she'll look like takes creativity
anyway about your english, dont worry about it. your english is better than most peope i know.
i feel like im being a pest, so im not going to provide anymore assistance/advice unless you ask for it, seeing as that you already have the master of fursona creation *looks over towards symphony*
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| Posted: Wed May 06, 2009 1:55 pm Post subject: |
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| Symphony wrote: | | Kiala_Tiagra wrote: |
I was just wondering, miss symphony is there a way we could chat and discuss this together if its okay? I really need help on this one |
As I said, I won't mind helping you, but first you'll have to delete all the passages you've copied from my thread:
Personality, residence, hobbies, sex life, Male partner and Female partner, missionary, doggy, and orgasm.
If I am to help you'll, I'll require you to delete all those sections, and then we can look at coming up with something new for you, that isn't taken directly from my description or isn't just my ideas rewritten in your own words. |
okay. I edited the text. is it okay now? =0
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| Kiala_Tiagra wrote: |
okay. I edited the text. is it okay now? =0 |
Yes, now it's ready to begin with. I think that I'll be of most help in the sections concerning sex, as I'll probably find those the easiest to come up with ideas for based on what you can tell about your fursona. Like she's submissive, likes it a bit rough and such, right?
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| Symphony wrote: | | Kiala_Tiagra wrote: |
okay. I edited the text. is it okay now? =0 |
Yes, now it's ready to begin with. I think that I'll be of most help in the sections concerning sex, as I'll probably find those the easiest to come up with ideas for based on what you can tell about your fursona. Like she's submissive, likes it a bit rough and such, right? |
indeed it is all true, submissive, likes it rough, ...hmm....bondage maybe?
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Well, then how about starting out with some general ideas for her sexual preferences? Does she like to have sex with multiple partners? How about being tied down? Perhaps tied spread eagle, either face up or down, or tied bent over for her partner(s) to use her?
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now that is...a bit of a problem ^^;
because all the things you just said? its a yes...yesh I know its ridiculous, but my char is really open minded to all the things you just said, although....she kinda like having her self used by 3 guys, or females with strap ons while in soggy style maybe maybe while her hand is tied on her back?
PS: I gtg sleep not its 5 am here, I'll reply asap tomorrow
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Perhaps she could like being tied up and blindfolded, so she won't know who is using her where?
Or perhaps she enjoys when her partners frequently switch between holes, going from vaginal to anal to oral, or something like that?
And how about gagging or hair-pulling?
Let me know if my ideas are too extreme. 
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| Kiala_Tiagra wrote: | no your ideas is not too extreme, keep it up there x3 sounds good
PS: I have a feeling someone other than us is reading this thread miss symphony...and their mind is dirty |
Yeah that tends to happen on a forum. |
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