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PostPosted: Sat Aug 06, 2011 11:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 07, 2011 7:11 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hm... Maybe you can try running the piece by other people. Sometimes, the opinion of another can help get the creative juices flowing.
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 07, 2011 8:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Mr Derison, there's a bit of a reminder in the RP Forums that goes something like, "Not every post has to be epic. It just has to keep the story going." Also, 7 characters is enough for your own superfurry graphic novel! Very cool. However, it's easier to keep track of a team if you use the anime rule of five: Leader, Brick, Nerd, Wildcard, and the Goddess, and your main fursona (ftw) is one of them.

If you're not having fun with your post - keep it short, and the others will help you along as they post. My post is starting with a team, but it'll dwindle down to my main Metafurry by the end of it. It's tough to simply get the point across when what's in your head is like your favorite story, but not impossible.

I'm looking forward to your posts, PBB-peeps.
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 07, 2011 9:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks for the help Katmir. 4 of the characters including me are part of a squad the others are support characters.

How do i make the dialogue less "robotic" so to speak?
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 07, 2011 11:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well arty one thing i was thinking about is...

If you have 7 different characters to write dialog for wont it make character interaction between other posts really diffucult plus having to manage dialog for 7 characters make pretty much each post epic?

Im not telling you not to do it, its just a thought
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 08, 2011 5:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Katmir wrote:
Leaf wrote:
Hey Katmir! Thank you for the information! Interested in joining this little party?


I'm really interested in bringing my undead cyborg cowboy, BUUUT I'm having "continuity" issues. The first two Metafurry stories were not actually resolved, just kind of ended with Alice Bakk and NumLock deciding the next major plan of action.

I'm typing up an epic post just to "catch up" with the action according to the "filling in the blanks" that have been done so far. Plus, there's the superpower upgrade I have to tweak so I'm not playing in god-mode.


Talking of that. I really think that said or do something here. Just said if you are up for a assault or not. You said yourself that not post need to be epic. See, NumLock said yes and we storm the castle quickly before returning to the main goal. Or said no and we will leave the place to go to the mission. Maybe it will be easier to insert yourself in that rp if we manage to get a closure to the previous one.

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 08, 2011 8:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

silverleaf wrote:
Well arty one thing i was thinking about is...

If you have 7 different characters to write dialog for wont it make character interaction between other posts really diffucult plus having to manage dialog for 7 characters make pretty much each post epic?

Im not telling you not to do it, its just a thought


At least three have occasional dialog while the other four more so do note that this takes place before Inevitable Combat.
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 09, 2011 12:42 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

i was commenting on the fact that you said you were going to have a group for your posts, i probably misunderstood
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 09, 2011 4:47 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Who's turn is it anyway
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 09, 2011 10:56 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

arty's right now aaron
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 10, 2011 8:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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Talking of that. I really think that said or do something here [Unusual Reunion]. Just said if you are up for a assault or not. You said yourself that not post need to be epic. See, NumLock said yes and we storm the castle quickly before returning to the main goal. Or said no and we will leave the place to go to the mission. Maybe it will be easier to insert yourself in this rp if we manage to get a closure to the previous one.

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I'd rather make my decision based on what Riku has to say to Alice in Unusual Reunion. Here I go...
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 10, 2011 9:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I don't mean to sound rude, Artyom, but it's been a while since the last post. I need to get this game up and running again, so I can only give you until Friday midnight to post. Otherwise, I will have no choice but to skip your turn again.

However, if you feel you cannot participate and wish to drop out, please feel free to do so.
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 10, 2011 9:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

(This post was made in error. We apologize for the inconvenience.)
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 12, 2011 10:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Post is up what do you think.

Also note I can only post small sections at a time as some times my phone will lose signal and will delete everything i have written
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 12:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

so it's evan's post now?

might want to update the list showing who's turn it is, still says it's mine.
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 7:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Seeing as it's been quite some time, Evan has been skipped for this round.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 19, 2011 4:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

so catherines turn now hey all righty then also leaf i hope byron's up for some tough trianing Twisted Evil
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 21, 2011 1:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

dragonfly wrote:
(( <_< no cathri=ne why wont anyone listen riku destroyed the lab and the viruss i dont want all this smaples where saved crap he destroyed them no questions about it))


Alice is a lawyer. Lie is a carefully trained skill that she learn to master completely. The half-truths and twisted interpretations of reality are her best tools. Even if Riku destroyed all the samples, he is still alive and so are so many meta-furries. Riku is Alice living sample of the meta-virus in Alice's eyes. He maybe not really carry the virus but there are no proof that the infection isn't transmit to the childrens. Alice see the virus like still here and she will deny the fact that you destroyed it. Don't trust her words so much.

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 21, 2011 2:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

no cathrien if ya read his details he was born in austrlia no where near the viruss and his parent never left austrila he has no trace of the viruss inside him what so ever

in any case he is thought to be the cure to the viruss but because of his nature and unwilling to coporate with anyone and is near impossible to capture or get a blood sample from him it will never be proved

the reason why i wanted riku to destroy the meta makeing lab is beacuse riku hates metas who got there powers for the viruss as he belives they no nothing about the torture he has to go though being born with his powers and he keeps seeing them use there powers wrongly

so thats why he destroyed the labs and made sure to take out the viruss fully and without mistacke
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 21, 2011 2:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Dragonfly... The fact, is that Alice ignore it. You never show her proof of that you are free of the meta-virus. For her, you are a meta-furry like any other. Also, I just said it. She lie like she breathes. No, she doesn't the sample of the meta-virus but yes, she will pretend to have it.

Either you treat her of liar or you let it slide. This doesn't change the fact that she will spread the lie or think that she can revive the meta-virus anytime she want. Beside it would be more clear if you finally decide to reply in the previous post and that we actually play the moment when you destroy the laboratory.

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 21, 2011 2:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

well sorry cathrine but that is how riku is he has no viruss inside him and thats that

and no i dont plan to join that rp again so sorry but im not gonna post into it
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 21, 2011 4:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Im skiping my turn seens i have nuthing in mind to post.
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 21, 2011 6:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Can someone post the order list please. I don't know who's turn it is.
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 21, 2011 6:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Aaron_Thom wrote:
Can someone post the order list please. I don't know who's turn it is.


Posting Order:
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2. Evan_Himmel
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4. dragonfly
5. Aaron_Thom (Currently up!)
6. Mayfield
7. silverleaf
8. Artyom Derison

Your desire are my order. You have the list. And lucky you! It is your turn to post. You have the occasion right now to show us what you have in mind to make progress in this thread if you want. Not that I did that myself, I was happy to let the story flow slowly.

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 21, 2011 8:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks, I'll have my post up sometime tomorrow.
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 22, 2011 11:50 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Actually, Catherine... I'd like to throw in my two cents in this discussion. In correlation to what happened at the lab, the stuff that Bryon fell in was not the virus sample itself. It was a mutagen that would alter the virus within someone's body, enhancing one's abilities and granting them new ones. Think of it like Phazon from the Metroid Prime series.
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 22, 2011 1:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Leaf, hope you don't mind me taking over what's causing the the chaos, do you? I've got an idea.
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 22, 2011 1:52 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

*sits patiently waiting*
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 22, 2011 3:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Not at all. Go right ahead, Rhoda.
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 22, 2011 6:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ok my post is in arty is up now.

And i can't wait to see what you've got up your sleeve may
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