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Silvador Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2011 8:40 pm Post subject: Making new character. |
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Firstly, no, this is not a forum character.
Secondly, I am 'forging' a character of a more unique manner and posting it here in order to gain input on its production. Ideas and thoughts may come and go as I update and add and/or subtract parts. Essentially, I am playing mix and match and would like the opinions of the forum as I progress towards fully creating my new character.
Once more, this is not a character intended for forum use. For those of you who know of my writing, that is where she will be used for. So before you start slinging things around like "that's not allowed", remember that this character is only posted here for the purposes of gaining opinions and input on its production.
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Age: 23
Sex: Female
Species: Feline (of some kind)
Description:
Hair - Short, white with blue roots. (reference to be added)
Eyes - Ruby red
Bust - Round and perky. B-cup. They rest on her chest like spongy, round moulds of jello.
Body - Sensually curved with wide hips, thick thighs, round butt and trim waist (lithe and slender, but not skinny). Nipples, nose, lips and any "inner flesh" (including tongue, inner cheeks, vaginal flesh and so forth) are light blue; "outer flesh" pale pink. Her fur is short, soft and smooth, much like valuer. Her "underside" (front of the neck down, covering the whole front, between the thighs, between the buttocks and along the underside of her tail) is white.
Height - 5'9" (long legs)
Weight - (no fucking clue) Around 140lb, so I am told.
Notes:
- The pads on her hands, fingers and feet are the same blue colour as the stripe and ring.
- Her vaginal juices and saliva are also a light blue.
- She prefers male style clothing. T-shirts, pants, shorts and the like.
- She never wears bras.
- Her breasts are very sensitive and her nipples even more so. This means her nipples are typically erect and prominent, especially when she is wearing tight fitting tops.
- Aside from her typical choice of "boy's clothes", she also owns and occasionally wears a black "china dress" that hugs her figure closely. It is black, sleeveless and has a fire design reaching up from the base.
History:
Personality: Insatiable flirt with a low sense of modesty. Enjoys teasing. _________________
Fursonas: http://tinyurl.com/yzcsyug
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Pachs Rank: Super Veteran
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Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2011 8:43 pm Post subject: |
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Well for a curvy woman of about 6'4" I think the weight would be about....140lb. on the lighter side...maybe a little more...just my opinion.
And remember I like bigger woman Silv .....But I'm guessing she will be for a new story your doing? _________________ "Shake the hand that shook the world"
-Randall Flagg-
"Bleach is healthy... It's mostly water; and we're mostly water. Therefore, we are bleach."
-Nathan Explosion-
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Silvador Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2011 8:50 pm Post subject: |
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Well, I honestly have no idea how to gauge weight. I got a kinda picture in my head, but I couldn't tell you what that image weighed if my life depended on it.
As for her creation, I have no specific ideas for her usage as of yet. I brose FA and DA a bit and I see all these gorgeously created characters with unique colours and styles. I've never really been all that good at actually creating something from scratch. I tend to do much better at taking an already realised idea and adapting/altering it.
I saw that all my characters are more or less "generic" and I wanted one of those unique characters. One of those that stands out of the rest, like ZigZag, Sasha and many others. I want a character that isn't just another one of many. I guess you could even go so far as to say that I want to make an iconic character of my own. _________________
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Drofgod969 Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Sat Feb 26, 2011 12:46 pm Post subject: |
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Good luck with that Silv. _________________ yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. that's why it is called the present.
quoted by master Oogway off kong fu panda
Some weep, some cry, some make couches fly. - Katmir
Let me stand behind you in times of peace, let me stand infront of you in times of war, let me stand beside you as a equall, as a friend. |
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Silvador Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Sun Mar 06, 2011 3:57 am Post subject: |
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Lot of updates. Big changes. Let me know what you guys think. _________________
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Symphony Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Sun Mar 06, 2011 5:14 am Post subject: |
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Well, there's not much to comment on right now.
As for the physical description, I think you're making it a bit too complicated to properly visualize, without a drawing or other visual aid.
Regarding your wish to make an iconic character, I think you're trying too hard. Granted, you've only just started on this, but trying to come up with some unique kind of appearance isn't going to make a character any more iconic than the hundreds of others with "unique" looks on FA or DA. _________________ Constance Mayflower's bio
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Silvador Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Sun Apr 10, 2011 9:24 pm Post subject: |
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Minor alterations have been made. Specifically her colourings and bust.
Thoughts?
note: I will be linking a colour "key" very shortly. _________________
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Rune174 Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Sun Apr 10, 2011 10:17 pm Post subject: |
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From what I read, it seems that your character here might look a little like a tomboy. _________________
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Silvador Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Sun Apr 10, 2011 10:53 pm Post subject: |
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That seems to be what she is turning into. _________________
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Rune174 Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Mon Apr 11, 2011 4:20 am Post subject: |
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Nothing wrong with that I suppose. _________________
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Drofgod969 Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Mon Apr 11, 2011 11:53 am Post subject: |
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cool char silv. _________________ yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. that's why it is called the present.
quoted by master Oogway off kong fu panda
Some weep, some cry, some make couches fly. - Katmir
Let me stand behind you in times of peace, let me stand infront of you in times of war, let me stand beside you as a equall, as a friend. |
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Silvador Royal Member of BonBon
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Silvador Royal Member of BonBon
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Posted: Sun Apr 17, 2011 9:42 pm Post subject: |
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Due to recent enlightenment, I was forced to scrap her fur design. I've also decided to go with a more house cat form. I'm toying with the idea of a secondary form for her. Maybe some kind of transformation. *shrug* _________________
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