Flashback: Discussion

[Jerin Nekros]

Working on Jerin's story. Figured I'd make this thread first so i can talk to people about what they think, and plan out the story. Speaking of which I need to talk to Cassandre, Shadow_Twisted, and Kommy about something on the main plot line.

The story is here http://forums.pleasurebonbon.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=7757
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My Fursona(updates occasionally) http://forums.pleasurebonbon.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=7537
"Revenge is a dish that is best served cold. It is very cold in space." - Khan (Ricardo Montalban) Star Trek II: The Wrath of Khan

[Mystic]

Well, you just gotta get the right type of distraction to get them over here. *Holds up a sign that says "Booze and Hookers"*
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Oh, I'd tell myself
What good do you do
Convince myself

[Tadelesh]

I see no booze or hookers.. False advertising!

I would give you some feedback, Jerin, but unfortunately I don't read anyone's stories at the moment - too busy.
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Wow, sarcasm! That's original.

[Jerin Nekros]

yeah and actually while this is futher up here. Cna i ask people in general who's fursonas i have permission to use?
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My Fursona(updates occasionally) http://forums.pleasurebonbon.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=7537
"Revenge is a dish that is best served cold. It is very cold in space." - Khan (Ricardo Montalban) Star Trek II: The Wrath of Khan

[Marx-Paragon]

[Tadelesh]

Hmm. Where's it set? It might be that Tadelesh was never anywhere near there, so even suggesting to use him would be silly.
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Wow, sarcasm! That's original.

[Jerin Nekros]

the main story line is in bonbon about a month after his arrival. The flashbacks vary from Northwest America to Australia.
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My Fursona(updates occasionally) http://forums.pleasurebonbon.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=7537
"Revenge is a dish that is best served cold. It is very cold in space." - Khan (Ricardo Montalban) Star Trek II: The Wrath of Khan

[Tadelesh]

Well, perhaps in BonBon. Tadelesh has never visited America or Australia.
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Wow, sarcasm! That's original.

[Mystic]

What would you need our characters for? Just appearences, interactions, or are you thinking naughty thoughts?
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Oh, I'd tell myself
What good do you do
Convince myself

[Jerin Nekros]

[LabrnMystic]

I'll partake in the flashback, but I'd like to be carrying a potted plant that, as each flashback gets closer and closer to the present day, the plant I'm carrying slowly grows to a full out tree in the present time.
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The suspense is killing me. I hope it will last.

[Jerin Nekros]

[LabrnMystic]

*shrugs* Lets go with Australia. You know, I was actually born there. ^_^
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The suspense is killing me. I hope it will last.

[Jerin Nekros]

ok any time in particular? those are going to be happening about in the past 4 years about
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My Fursona(updates occasionally) http://forums.pleasurebonbon.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=7537
"Revenge is a dish that is best served cold. It is very cold in space." - Khan (Ricardo Montalban) Star Trek II: The Wrath of Khan

[Jerin Nekros]

Hey Ewan is it okay if i use the Golden glass? and if i can what time does it open in the morning?
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"Revenge is a dish that is best served cold. It is very cold in space." - Khan (Ricardo Montalban) Star Trek II: The Wrath of Khan

[Cassandre]

You have my permission to use CLR for anything, just seeing, interaction, or naughty bits. Remember though, that she has just escapedan insane asylum and is searching for hre estranged husband. speaking of which, I must edit my background.

What is it that you need to speak with me about? oh, and by the wya, if we interact, make it because you have information, and if we interact naughtily, I like to dominate. But, I can be submissive. And I'm super insane right then.

Just to let you know.

What is it you wanted to speak about?
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[insert witty comment]

[Jerin Nekros]

I'll keep that in mind whe i need to get the lime build-up off my shower wall.

Anyway, idea i was thinking about. namely some "out of town" talent being hired to deal with Samuel and CLR. talen being some "old friends" of jerin as it were
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"Revenge is a dish that is best served cold. It is very cold in space." - Khan (Ricardo Montalban) Star Trek II: The Wrath of Khan

[Cassandre]

mmkay, I understood virtually nothing in that statement.

And I see you've adopted the way I call her CLR.
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[JohnnyPsycho]

It was a pun, Cassandre... your initials (Cassandre La Rue) are also the brand name of a farily well-known cleaning solution here in the states... Calcium, Lime, and Rust remover, thus the name CLR
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[Cassandre]

Dammit. From now on I'm callling her ClR
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[Jerin Nekros]

yeah ok to clarify what i said, i'm thinking some bushwhackers from australia with a grudge against Jerin got hired to take out CLR and Samuel.
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My Fursona(updates occasionally) http://forums.pleasurebonbon.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=7537
"Revenge is a dish that is best served cold. It is very cold in space." - Khan (Ricardo Montalban) Star Trek II: The Wrath of Khan

[Cassandre]

Hm. Okay. They could be friends of victims, or maybe friends of contacts that had to be killed. Once they knew too much, they wer killed.

Or, they could be relations to Pierre. Nasty, rotton, fucking, ass-hole...
Hehe, sometimes I can hate my characters sooo much I want to kill them. Which is good becuase he ends up with his blood staining the walls of his new home red. His intestines are wreathed on the door, and his penis- You don't want to know I assume.
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[Jerin Nekros]

Yeah one of them is the brother to a guy Jerin killed, I could work out the other two as having lost relatives who were traveling.
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My Fursona(updates occasionally) http://forums.pleasurebonbon.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=7537
"Revenge is a dish that is best served cold. It is very cold in space." - Khan (Ricardo Montalban) Star Trek II: The Wrath of Khan

[Jerin Nekros]

ok finally getting to where i'm working on this again. should be posting another entry in a week or two depending. I've reworked the plot a little, in part due to some people disappearing, and partly because my initial idea didn't quite blend into the town right. Still looking for permissions, though i need to talk a few people about certain plot points, namely Kommy, Constance, Caroline, Samuel, and Jess. No particular rush since i shouldn't be getting to anything involving you for a bit.
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My Fursona(updates occasionally) http://forums.pleasurebonbon.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=7537
"Revenge is a dish that is best served cold. It is very cold in space." - Khan (Ricardo Montalban) Star Trek II: The Wrath of Khan