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PostPosted: Fri Jul 03, 2009 2:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thank you Embarassed Very Happy


I'm still having computer problems. I can't copy text from a document to anywhere else. The last post in the diary, I had to type in word for word, while reading it from my actual diary document. It took a while to do that, but I was itching to add another entry. I'll see when I add the next one. I need to write something more soon as well.
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 03, 2009 7:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Here's what I've one before. I would write out the entire thing, or in your case, several entries, and then post them a day a part. For a story series on yiffstar, I actually had the entire thing written, but posted them a month apart.
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 05, 2009 9:04 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I've considered doing that, but I just can't wait all that long once I've finished writing a new entry. I want to post it quickly. Very Happy

I'm also going to add another entry to the diary today. Again I have to do it the slow way, by re-writing it all right here in a post, but I don't want to wait too long between each added entry.
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 05, 2009 6:30 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

An interesting idea Symphony. I suppose its your alternative to getting into some of these racy RP sessions, nya?
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 05, 2009 7:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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An interesting idea Symphony. I suppose its your alternative to getting into some of these racy RP sessions, nya?

I guess you could say that. I haven't really thought about it that way, but it certainly is my way of writing something more about my fursona, and my way of writing some erotic scenes. I'm in complete control here, and I think that might be a requirement for me if I am to write anything sexual.
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 05, 2009 11:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hmm. I tend to like that as well. I don't like it when someone uses CLR and makes he do soemthing she would never do, such as beg. I refuse to let that happen and stop until it gets edited.

Its kind of like Drofgod and violence, or something that might endanger others. Except in sex...

CLR's a bit of a dominatrix, and I don't like it when people post in a way that she seems submissive.

I assume that you wouldn't like that for Constance, am I correct?
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 06, 2009 1:00 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sorry for the double post, but I read the last evtry. It makes you wonder what kind of fun they'll be having.
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 06, 2009 11:16 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Cassandre wrote:

I assume that you wouldn't like that for Constance, am I correct?

That's correct. I'm very protective of my fursona. Both in what happens to her in RPs where I participate, and in case others want to use her for a story or picture.


and I'm looking forward to continuing the diary. I just can't do it until I get my computer fixed. The next entry is too long for me to want to re-write it all. And they'll certainly be having fun, Cassandre. Razz
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 08, 2009 12:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I can now post my entries without problems again. Now I just need to get back to actually writing new ones as well. Razz
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 08, 2009 1:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Symphony wrote:
I can now post my entries without problems again. Now I just need to get back to actually writing new ones as well. Razz


goood luck than with it.
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 08, 2009 9:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Symphony wrote:
I can now post my entries without problems again. Now I just need to get back to actually writing new ones as well. Razz


Good to hear, and nice job on your last post. I might have to start doing something similar, though, I doubt i'd do it exactly the same way.
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 02, 2009 4:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I knew it had been a while since I had last posted an entry in the diary, but I was quite shocked to find out that it had been nearly a month.

It's not that I have had writer's block. I had already planned my lates post, and I have come up with many ideas for future events and scenes. So it's not that. I guess that I have just been too occupied with other things lately, to wanting to sit down and spend a couple of hours writing my story.
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 02, 2009 4:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I know what you mean.

Wanted to get on writing your story, but too busy with the real world. ^^

I've read your post! Looking good. Can't to read more! -^w^-
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 02, 2009 4:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thank you, Lidia Smile

These entries take anywhere from half an hour to three or four hours for me to write, and I prefer to write them without too mane breaks. So it can be a bit too much for me to do some days with all the time I have to devote to my job and other things I need to take care of. But I do so enjoy to write and com up with ideas. I have to admit though, that pretty much all the ideas I've been coming up with lately have been for sex scenes. Embarassed
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 02, 2009 4:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, with brainstorm and time needed, a good writer makes a great story. :3
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 02, 2009 4:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Symphony wrote:
Thank you, Lidia Smile
I have to admit though, that pretty much all the ideas I've been coming up with lately have been for sex scenes. Embarassed


bet some people are looking forward to those coming out *eyes henk suspiciously.*
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 9:09 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm honestly not sure how well the sex scenes are going to work in diary style. Confused
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 9:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

your creative Very Happy I'm sure if you want to include them you'll find some way
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 9:40 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh I'm going to include them. Don't worry about that. Wink

I'm just not sure how well people will like them. Many probably prefer such scenes written in a more traditional way, rather than having Constance think back on the things she did and how they made her feel.
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 10:24 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Symphony wrote:
Thank you, Lidia Smile

These entries take anywhere from half an hour to three or four hours for me to write, and I prefer to write them without too mane breaks. So it can be a bit too much for me to do some days with all the time I have to devote to my job and other things I need to take care of. But I do so enjoy to write and com up with ideas. I have to admit though, that pretty much all the ideas I've been coming up with lately have been for sex scenes. Embarassed


No worries. We all have our spots of dirty minds. Wink
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 8:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I have to say this diary idea is really interesting. I can;t make it myself, but you really took great deal in making your fursona as good as possible =D and its great
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 12:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thank you very much, Kiala. Smile

I haven't been updating the diary for a long time now, but I hope to get back to writing again soon. I still have my ideas and I really want to write, but sometimes I just don't feel that I have the energy or desire to sit and work on this. Sad
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 21, 2009 2:25 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

hehe i sometimes feel the same to some of my stories.
if i wanna read other people's story i need to concentrate first if not many question will come out
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 10:19 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm really trying to get back into continuing my story. I have so many ideas, but it seems that I always find something else to do than to actually write.

I've now tried to write a short description of Hannah, since she's such a central character, and it might help me get back to the writing. I also hope that others might get a better idea of what she looks like.


Name: Hannah

Age: 22

Gender: Female

Species: Chinchilla

Nationality: French

Occupation: Singer/actress

Height: About average height, making her a head shorter than Constance

Build: Petite build with small breasts.

Color: Her fur is completely white

Hair: Shoulderlength, black hair that has a slightly unruly look to it

Eyes: Blue

Clothing: She has a preference for dresses with short skirts that end above her knees

Personality: Always happy, always full of joy. Hannah is an outgoing girl who loves nothing more than to have fun with everything she does. She has a talent for coming up with funny remarks about almost anything, and she always manages to make the people around her laugh and enjoy her company. Hannah is also a girl full of life and energy. She often runs, leaps or dances around instead of merely walking, and she always has something to do or somewhere she wants to go.

She is quite a flirt and a tease too, around both males and females, especially if she knows it'll embarrass her "victim". Hannah loves to make all sorts of suggestive comments and to talk openly about sex, and she will quite often do so without the least bit of shame or modesty.
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 1:30 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

She sounds pretty. :3

I like her species, Chinchilla. There are so adorable. :3
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 4:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

does this person also come in bonbon or only in your dairy?
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 4:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

She's just a character I've come up with for the diary. I don't think there's any way she'll be able to show up outside the diary.
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 12, 2010 11:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hello Symphony,

I know it has been a long time since you posted in your diary. You might never read this post, however, i really enjoyed the story so far. Although this is bonbon and every one is open about sex. i had an idea about Constance writing it in her diary, since most people do not describe to their diary their sex life, she could just say that they had sex and how it made her feel. (happy,excited) you did a great job describing how Hannah makes Constance feel, and i think it is a good basis for writing about the sex scenes. if i was as good a writer as you i probably would have done something like this, however, im not afraid to describe sex scenes only because i know the audience is made up of adults.

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 13, 2010 1:42 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thank you very much for the nice comment and the interest in my story. I think I'll give it another try. I actually did begin on the next entry a long time ago, but I just didn't feel inspired to continue. It's a bit odd really, because it's an entry I had been planning for quite a while, and one I had been looking forward to writing.

I do plan to write the sex scenes in detail, if I ever get to the point where they'll appear in the story. Some will be more detailed than others, of course, and they won't be as graphically described as in typical erotic novels, but there will be descriptions of positions and such. At least that's my plan so far.

I don't intend to use many of the common words to describe male and female anatomy, though. For some reason I don't think it'll be fitting for Constance's diary to use words like cock and pussy, so it'll most likely be written in the same style that I have written most other sexual details about Constance.
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 13, 2010 9:55 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

(I don't like it when people use the words dick and pussy they are crass in my mind rather I use words like throbbing manhood or juicy flower so soft and warm ^_^)


Well i wait in anticipation of you posting another entry in Constance's diary
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