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PostPosted: Sun Dec 27, 2015 4:54 am    Post subject: The story of Todoxas Rouge Reply with quote

Since he was young Todoxas has always had a great love for art. He loved to draw and he would draw anything that he came up with every single chance he got, as the years went by and as his artistic skills became more and more refined he found that he could make a profit from his artistic talent. And so the name Todoxas Rogue became a very famous name in the world of art, and his masterpieces made him very rich over the years that followed.
But one day something happened that people did not see coming. After his 20th birthday, Todoxas found himself feeling depressed and lonely. He fell into a pit of sadness after hearing about the unfortunate death of his childhood friend Mina.
Feeling that he would not be able to find happiness nor peace ever again he had heard rumors of a town that is well hidden in the mountains, a town where nobody asks your name, a town of Pleasure and sex. Feeling the need to get out of where he was and go to Bon Bon in hopes of finding peace, quiet, and serenity. And so he backed his belongings along with a fair sum of florins, and hopped aboard the next train to Bon Bon where he prayed that he would find the happiness and peace that he was looking for.
A few days later the train pulled into Bon Bon and Todd made his way into town and he was not expecting to see what he saw next. All around him were the locals the women in particular, they were bare breasted and their panties were showing and yet they went about their way. Some of the local women were flirting with some of the male tourists as they made their way through town.
But then something caught the new comer’s eye. It was the Delight Castle sitting at the end of the street, His curiosity had gotten the best of him and he began to make his way towards it. And all the while Todd’s mind was racing with curiosity and excitement, and when he finally entered through the front doors he beheld the spectacle in front of him. Tourists and locals gambling with each other, gorgeous women everywhere, and everything was peaceful and calm. He then noticed the bar across a little way from the lobby, feeling a bit parched he sat down and made himself comfortable.
Then suddenly the bartender walked up to Todd and asked “Mmh a new comer, what will it be honey?” In which Todd replied with saying “I think I’ll have a Gin and Tonic please.” With a warm smile on her face she replies “Coming right up, sir” As Todd waited for his drink he began think to himself about what he should do now that he was in Bon Bon. “Here’s your drink sir.” The bartender said to Todd. “Oh thank you very much.” Todd replied has he gave her a florin.
Todd took a few sips and resumed his thinking. But then he felt a hand brush across his left shoulder and heard the sultry whisper of a woman in his left ear. He turned around and standing to his left was a lovely raccoon woman with sparkling purple eyes, and wearing a yellow and orange dress with purple leggings. With a seductive smile she greets Todd by saying “Hi there, foxy. My names Violet. I see your new here, wanna come with me and mess around a bit?” She asks Todd leaning over towards him revealing her exposed cleavage.
Todd becoming entranced by the sight of her chest and becoming slowly aroused, he gives in and accepts Violets offer. And with that Violet takes Todd’s hand and leads him up to her room.

Name: Todoxas Rogue A.K.A. Todd Rogue
Age: 20
Gender: male
Species: Fox
Height: 6'9
Weight: 236 lb
Personality: Kind, gentle, compassionate, but is fully capable of defending himself or others. A little bit shy when meeting new people, enjoys a good drink with friends and having fun. Dislikes being used or betrayed the same goes for seeing women abused and mistreated by others.
Sexually: Very handsome, well built, and nicely groomed. Gentle and passionate in bed and is good at making women orgasm, also pretty good with his cock (16 inches long) but Todoxas can also be rough if his partner wants it rough. He usually has a massive sex drive and is capable of going several rounds in bed but usually like to be accommodating to his sex partner and doing what she likes to do in bed. And finally Todoxas is also excellent when it comes to foreplay with his special tongue technique that is so arousing that it drives his sexual partners into a lustful whirlwind. at least in his sexual fantasies, in reality he is a virgin with a desire for sexual pleasure.
Occupation: Wealthy artist, Writer, and Recreational actor.
Hobbies: Playing strip blackjack with pretty women, participating in erotic films, going on walks in the afternoon, Writing fictional stories and some erotic stories, Painting and sketching nude models, and enjoying a good glass of wine every evening at 8:30 PM.
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 31, 2015 4:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

(( Hey ToddRouge69,

um... did you want comments on this or anything? Or, was it more of just a stand-alone bit of self work? ))
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 31, 2015 11:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Caroline wrote:
(( Hey ToddRouge69,

um... did you want comments on this or anything? Or, was it more of just a stand-alone bit of self work? ))
Everyone is welcome to comment on this. And this is actually a bit of both, I just felt like the bio I previously posted didn't stand out that much, I thought that if my sona was going to be part of PBB then you guys should know exactly who he is. and sorry about the lack of double spacing on this and all my other posts, this is my first time using a forum. i'll work on fixing my formatting. Embarassed
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 01, 2016 5:02 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

What's he doing in Bon Bon? Any occupation or hobbies?


A small suggestion would be to break the story into smaller sections. It's a bit of a wall of text Smile
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 01, 2016 5:59 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Symphony wrote:
What's he doing in Bon Bon? Any occupation or hobbies?


A small suggestion would be to break the story into smaller sections. It's a bit of a wall of text Smile
Yeah, I know about my lack of smaller sections that is in my posts. Silvador suggested that I put a few spaces in. But I honestly do not know how to do that because this my first time using a message board. Anyway about your question, Symphony. Todoxas' reasons for going to Bon Bon is somewhat explained at the end of the story. But I'll be glad to explain what he will do during his time spent in Bon Bon. If someone can tell me how I can break up my posts into smaller readable sections, I can quickly edit it so you guys can read it. Or would you like me to just tell you?
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 02, 2016 12:02 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Symphony wrote:
What's he doing in Bon Bon? Any occupation or hobbies?


A small suggestion would be to break the story into smaller sections. It's a bit of a wall of text Smile
I just updated my fursona's profile. I added his Occupation and Hobbies, enjoy Smile
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 02, 2016 10:39 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Here are just a few tips and other errata to consider:

1)Use Word or Office for your story. You can copy and paste the text into posts to break down your story.

2)Just from what Vanessa has talked about in the past, magic/supernatural creatures and/or abilities and items no longer exist. Scarlett has been and is the only exception to this rule.

3)Also from what Vanessa has posted on breeding. Only furs of a similar type can breed true(i.e. true canines such as dogs/wolves/coyotes/and false foxes).
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 02, 2016 2:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

DesertWolf wrote:
Here are just a few tips and other errata to consider:

1)Use Word or Office for your story. You can copy and paste the text into posts to break down your story.

2)Just from what Vanessa has talked about in the past, magic/supernatural creatures and/or abilities and items no longer exist. Scarlett has been and is the only exception to this rule.

3)Also from what Vanessa has posted on breeding. Only furs of a similar type can breed true(i.e. true canines such as dogs/wolves/coyotes/and false foxes).
ok. I did not know about those rules. But that is how and what my fursona is outside of the PBB community. But if it will make things go a bit smoother with my sona, I will leave out his current backstory and write a new one made specifically for PBB. And I will make him a pure breed fox too. I just thought that my sona would be more unique if I uploaded his original bio. But ok I'll follow the rules. No magical characters, and No hybrids.
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 02, 2016 2:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

It might help to look at historical things going on to help with your character. I'm not saying he can't be an emperor I'm just saying it help in how he would interact with different societies and the world in general. Also,hybrids would probably exist just not in the same way you're thinking. Things like ligers,tigons,wolf and dog or if you want, two different fox species which is something we haven't seen yet.
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 02, 2016 8:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

DesertWolf wrote:
It might help to look at historical things going on to help with your character. I'm not saying he can't be an emperor I'm just saying it help in how he would interact with different societies and the world in general. Also,hybrids would probably exist just not in the same way you're thinking. Things like ligers,tigons,wolf and dog or if you want, two different fox species which is something we haven't seen yet.
Ok then. I'll do some research.
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 03, 2016 3:38 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ok guy's i've decided to start from scratch with my Fursona's bio and story. so I hope you guys enjoy the new take on Todoxas. and yes my sona falls within the rules of posting. anyways enjoy everybody Smile
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 03, 2016 8:00 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

(( Hey ToddRouge69,

Me and my dumb sense of humor.

Anyway, I can't help but think of "The Tod" from Scrubs, when I read your character intro. I keep thinking that Todaxas will say something like, "The Todd approves." No offense meant. Just... my dumb sense of humor.

Anyway, I'll take a look at it later, and give you some feedback. ))
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 03, 2016 6:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Caroline wrote:
(( Hey ToddRouge69,

Me and my dumb sense of humor.

Anyway, I can't help but think of "The Tod" from Scrubs, when I read your character intro. I keep thinking that Todaxas will say something like, "The Todd approves." No offense meant. Just... my dumb sense of humor.

Anyway, I'll take a look at it later, and give you some feedback. ))
hehe that is pretty funny. I think my fursonas new bio will be a little more down to earth than the last version was. Laughing oh and by the way, I look forward to hearing your feedback Caroline. Very Happy
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 15, 2016 2:34 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh my gosh welcome to the site, glad you are here. It's been a while since we had anyone new. Love your sona, and I can't wait to have ya around.
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 16, 2016 12:00 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ezra Lee Stewart wrote:
Oh my gosh welcome to the site, glad you are here. It's been a while since we had anyone new. Love your sona, and I can't wait to have ya around.
Thank you Smile i'm glad to be here.
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 26, 2016 5:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

This is just an observance, here you have your sona being good at sex but in the flaws thread you state he's still a virgin.
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 26, 2016 9:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

DesertWolf wrote:
This is just an observance, here you have your sona being good at sex but in the flaws thread you state he's still a virgin.
Well I can explain that. You see Todoxas often imagines himself at being good at sex and that he pictures himself being able to pleasure any woman, but he has never had the chance to do so. He is a virgin on the outside, but on the inside he is a sex god.
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 28, 2016 5:02 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sounds like a delight!
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