FAQFAQ   SearchSearch   RegisterRegister   ProfileProfile   Log inLog in 
The relationship between Mary and Betty.

 
Post new topic   Reply to topic    PleasureBonBon Forum -> PleasureBonBon.com Discussions
View previous topic :: View next topic  
Author Message
Vanessa
Official Artist


Joined: 13 Nov 2004
Posts: 1088

PostPosted: Thu Nov 26, 2015 9:15 am    Post subject: The relationship between Mary and Betty. Reply with quote

I'd like to participate to the discussions about the story developing, but you know that I am a bit timid because I do not write well in English and I am ashamed for errors , however I would like to know if is clear for you all the relationship between Mary and Betty and I try to interact more anyway, if you do not care too much about my errors...Embarassed
About the question on Mary and Betty I mean what do they think of each other and what kind of bond unites them. I suppose that I was quite clear in the story, leaving clues here and there... (about Edelweiss too) but maybe I not have been enough. Let me know your opinions Smile
_________________

http://www.pleasurebonbon.com
Back to top
View user's profile
Silvador
Royal Member of BonBon


Joined: 20 Oct 2009
Posts: 12351

PostPosted: Thu Nov 26, 2015 9:23 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Your English isn't too bad. And practise can only help you to improve it. As for the errors, we make mistakes so that we can learn from them. Smile



As far as the relationship between Mary and Betty goes, I get the impression that, at current times, it's a close friendship, much like between siblings. However, I suspect that in the future it could quite easily be a relationship of lovers, and that Betty may even already want such a relationship with Mary. I get the impression that Mary might very well be open to this, but simply isn't aware of it yet.
_________________

Fursonas: http://tinyurl.com/yzcsyug
Back to top
View user's profile
Caroline
Royal Member of BonBon


Joined: 22 Dec 2008
Posts: 2173

PostPosted: Thu Nov 26, 2015 7:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

(( Hey Vanessa,

For what it's worth, your English is way better than my Italian, so no worries. Smile At least I'm assuming your native tongue is Italian.

Anyway, overall I get the impression that Mary and Betty are the "not-love-interest" couple. What I mean is that, while Mary is really curious about adult situations and Mary is willing to teach Betty... I don't really see either having romantic or deep-felt feelings for each other in that way. They're more... older sister / younger sister to me. I get the impression that Betty wants to keep Mary from making the same mis-steps she made growing up. And, from the other side, I see Mary idolizing Betty due to her wordly-ness.

Anyway, overall... I don't see it as romantic. More two sisters growing up. ))
Back to top
View user's profile
ToddRogue69
Rank: Mr. Fabulous


Joined: 25 Dec 2015
Posts: 438

PostPosted: Mon Dec 28, 2015 4:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

For me the relationship between Mary and Betty is a pretty strong bond of friendship, because the two have many things in common. Like how they both feel alone in the world, that they both didn't have a mother they could talk to, and I also guess that they are connected due to Red Boredeaux being betrothed to Mary and falling in love with Betty while helping them send letters to each other. But I think that their friendship might be taken to the next level by two methods. One, Mary had become a very beautiful young woman and has a way of being alluring even if she doesn't really believe it herself. Two, Betty has become bisexual not only seducing male customers but also having sex with her friend Violet from time to time. But we never really see Betty being intimate with the other women of Bon Bon. I think that this might change once Betty see's Mary again for the first time since they were seperated. Betty might start to develop certain feelings about Mary, but she would try to hold back out of fear that Mary would not understand or that she would react to her advances in the wrong way. So Betty would start slow by talking to Mary about the books and letters she has sent her over the years and how there is so much more to love that what she has read about. This of course would remind Betty of Red and what she told her in the past issue, But she would brush it off as she would continue to to explain the other methods of love eventually getting around to homosexual love. This would cause Mary to bring up Wilson her new gay butler that she tried to seduce but he rejected her. This would cause Betty to become a bit agitated at William, but quickly regaining her composure before Mary would notice. But then Betty would start to explain the love between two women, this would spark Mary's curiosity and asks Betty "how a woman could get sexual pleasure from another woman?" This would cause Betty to lean in close to Mary and ask her "would you like to find out?" Betty would then slowly begin to caress Mary seductively but sweetly. At first Mary is a bit nervous but as Betty slowly caresses Mary's body, Mary slowly gives in letting Betty undress her as Betty gets undressed with her. Then Betty would brush her hand against Mary's cheek as she leans in and kisses her on the mouth. Sorry I got a bit carried away Embarassed Anyways I think that both Mary and Betty would develop somewhat of a romantic relationship and that Mary would be hesitant at first but would slowly give into Betty's advancements especially after being denied by both Wilson and Red. And finally I believe that Mary will lose her virginity not to William or Red, but to Betty. At least I hope she does personally.
_________________
https://e621.net/user/show/143867

http://www.furaffinity.net/user/toddrogue69/

https://toddrogue69.sofurry.com/
Back to top
View user's profile
ToddRogue69
Rank: Mr. Fabulous


Joined: 25 Dec 2015
Posts: 438

PostPosted: Mon Dec 28, 2015 4:26 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

For me the relationship between Mary and Betty is a pretty strong bond of friendship, because the two have many things in common. Like how they both feel alone in the world, that they both didn't have a mother they could talk to, and I also guess that they are connected due to Red Boredeaux being betrothed to Mary and falling in love with Betty while helping them send letters to each other. But I think that their friendship might be taken to the next level by two methods. One, Mary had become a very beautiful young woman and has a way of being alluring even if she doesn't really believe it herself. Two, Betty has become bisexual not only seducing male customers but also having sex with her friend Violet from time to time. But we never really see Betty being intimate with the other women of Bon Bon. I think that this might change once Betty see's Mary again for the first time since they were seperated. Betty might start to develop certain feelings about Mary, but she would try to hold back out of fear that Mary would not understand or that she would react to her advances in the wrong way. So Betty would start slow by talking to Mary about the books and letters she has sent her over the years and how there is so much more to love that what she has read about. This of course would remind Betty of Red and what she told her in the past issue, But she would brush it off as she would continue to to explain the other methods of love eventually getting around to homosexual love. This would cause Mary to bring up Wilson her new gay butler that she tried to seduce but he rejected her. This would cause Betty to become a bit agitated at William, but quickly regaining her composure before Mary would notice. But then Betty would start to explain the love between two women, this would spark Mary's curiosity and asks Betty "how a woman could get sexual pleasure from another woman?" This would cause Betty to lean in close to Mary and ask her "would you like to find out?" Betty would then slowly begin to caress Mary seductively but sweetly. At first Mary is a bit nervous but as Betty slowly caresses Mary's body, Mary slowly gives in letting Betty undress her as Betty gets undressed with her. Then Betty would brush her hand against Mary's cheek as she leans in and kisses her on the mouth. Sorry I got a bit carried away Embarassed Anyways I think that both Mary and Betty would develop somewhat of a romantic relationship and that Mary would be hesitant at first but would slowly give into Betty's advancements especially after being denied by both Wilson and Red. And finally I believe that Mary will lose her virginity not to William or Red, but to Betty. At least I hope she does personally.
_________________
https://e621.net/user/show/143867

http://www.furaffinity.net/user/toddrogue69/

https://toddrogue69.sofurry.com/
Back to top
View user's profile
Symphony
Royal Member of BonBon


Joined: 13 Apr 2008
Posts: 2620

PostPosted: Fri Jan 01, 2016 5:47 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm looking forward to seeing how their relationship develops. Especially how Mary reacts to Betty's offer Razz
_________________
Constance Mayflower's bio

Constance Mayflower's diary

The Mayflower Diaries
Back to top
View user's profile
ToddRogue69
Rank: Mr. Fabulous


Joined: 25 Dec 2015
Posts: 438

PostPosted: Fri Jan 01, 2016 6:00 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Symphony wrote:
I'm looking forward to seeing how their relationship develops. Especially how Mary reacts to Betty's offer Razz
:3 I can't wait! love
_________________
https://e621.net/user/show/143867

http://www.furaffinity.net/user/toddrogue69/

https://toddrogue69.sofurry.com/
Back to top
View user's profile
Display posts from previous:   
Post new topic   Reply to topic    PleasureBonBon Forum -> PleasureBonBon.com Discussions All times are GMT - 8 Hours
Page 1 of 1

 
You cannot post new topics in this forum
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
You cannot edit your posts in this forum
You cannot delete your posts in this forum
You cannot vote in polls in this forum


Powered by phpBB © 2001, 2002 phpBB Group