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PostPosted: Mon Jun 01, 2009 8:36 am    Post subject: STORY: Fantasy World Of Women Reply with quote

Here's a new sexible story!

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Warning: Futa, Orgasm, Cumshot, Anal Sex, Bang Bang, Boobjob, Sperms, Guro
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Character:
Mandy and Eris(From Grim adventure of Billy & Mandy)
Sabrina (The Teenage Witch)
Wanda and Princess Mandie (From Fairly Odd Parents)
Ember (From Danny Phantom)
Pixie (From Monster Rancher)
Psyme (From Sigma Star Saga)
Masane Amaha (From WitchBlade Anime)

In the dungeon, Wanda and Sabrina are having a full-time sex with 3 Red Devil sisters, Linda (With white hair), Lisa (With Black hair) and Marline (With Blue hair). Linda lays down and stretches out her reddish cock, Sabrina sits on her lap where her cock reaches in her anal, she puts her hands on her reddish boobs and rubs them while Linda grabs her butt cheeks and pumps her anal. Sabrina orgasm as her reddish cock gets warmer in her anal and hits her G-spot as she humps her ass, Linda laughs evily as Sabrina moans softly in pain. She made a last hump and made a massive burst of boiling cum with sperms in her anal, Sabrina bends over and kisses her on the lips while her boobs are squeezed on her reddish cock, Linda sits up and gets on her knees while Sabrina grabs around her shoulders and gets her legs around her and holds on tight. Linda feels her boiling cum squirting out of Sabrina's anal and oozes on her reddish cock and sack, she gets up and starts humping on her ass again while she's still cumming, Sabrina closes eyes and moans loudly in pain as her reddish cock gets stronger as she pumps her anal.

Meanwhile, Marline was laying down getting Wanda's sweet big ass on her lap where her sweet reddish cock reaches in her anal. Lisa crawls on Wanda and shoves her cock in her anal, she closes her eyes and grunts as she pushes her cock in, Wanda grabs around Marline and kisses her on the lips while she holds on tight and squeezes her boobs on her reddish boobs. Lisa gets her head over her shoulder and licks around her cheek while she anal rides on her, Marline holds Wanda's butt cheeks tight and humps her ass harder until her sack gets full. Lisa speeds up with her anal riding and gets her sack filled up, Marline got her sack full but she had to keep pumping until Lisa gets her sack full. Now they're making a massive countdown on her sweet anal, Wanda stops kissing so Marline can start a countdown. Wanda closes her eyes and gets ready to orgasm, Lisa and Marline starts counting down as they thrusts their cocks on her anal and hits her G-spot. Wanda moans loudly in pain as their reddish cocks gets hot in her anal, They made a last hump and made a sound of massive burst of boiling hot cum with spicy sperms in her anal. Wanda raised her head up and moaned very loudly in pain, Lisa pulls her cock out so Wanda can get up, turn around and sit her ass back down to get Marline's cock in her anal again. Wanda reaches from behind and grabs around her, Lisa grabs Wanda's legs, shoves her cock in her anal and starts pumping again while she's spreads her legs and holds them. Marline reaches Wanda's boobs and rubs them to increase her pleasure, Lisa thrusts her cock in her anal slowly and harder while their boiling hot cum oozes out of Wanda's anal gets on Marline's cock and sack. Marline laughs evily as she hears a sound of Wanda's orgasm as Lisa gives her a massive pain in the ass which makes her moan loudly.

Wanda felt horny and exhausted that they gave her an anal full of boiling hot cum with sperms, Lisa let go of Wanda's legs so Marline can reach out, grabs her legs and holds them while she keeps them. Lisa spreads her legs a bit and squeezes her reddish boobs on Wanda's boobs, Marline asks Linda to hold Wanda's legs as soon as she's finish creaming Sabrina's anal. Linda finished busted her cum in Sabrina's anal, she pulls it out and puts her down so she can crawl in doggie style and enjoys her hot anal creampie with boiling sperms. Linda comes in front of them and stretches out her reddish cock, Lisa comes closer and sucks her reddish cock while she grabs around Wanda and holds on tight, Linda holds Wanda's legs spreaded while she's shoving her cock in Lisa mouth to increase her love level. Marline reaches out and grabs around Wanda and holds her tight while she thrusts her reddish cock in her anal. Lisa made Linda's cock cummed in her mouth with boiling sperms, Wanda closes her eyes as she suffers from they made they sexual adventage on her. Sabrina crawls over and licks their boiling cum squirting out of Wanda's anal, Marline licks around Wanda and spreads boiling saliva around her left cheek as she licks. Sabrina enjoyed their boiling hot cum oozes out of Wanda's anal, she gets above Lisa and shoves her cock in her sweet anal. She gets her legs over by Wanda's legs and sits down on Lisa, She grabs her by her waist and starts anal riding, Linda bends down and kisses Sabrina on the lips while Wanda reaches out with her right-hand to use her magic wand to make the purple candle appear in Sabrina's anal which increases her pleasure.

Meanwhile in 4th Bedroom in 6th Floor, Ember was on doggie style sucking Pixie's cock while Mandy was anal riding on her. She reaches and squeezes Pixie's boobs while she crosses her own legs to hold on tight as she goes in full throttle of her anal riding skill. Princess Mandie grabs Pixie from behind and shoves her cock in her anal, she reaches with her left-hand and rubs around her sack while she rubs her tummy with her right-hand. Pixie grabs her head with her left-hand and kisses her on the lips while she shoves her cock in Ember's mouth, she cummed in her mouth and pulls it out. Mandy cummed and busted her sperms in her G-spot, Ember reaches from behind and grabs around her to hold on tight while she's standing up on her knees and stretches out her cock. Mandie cummed in Pixie's anal and pulls it out, she crawls in doggie style and comes to do a blowjob on Ember's cock, she bends all the way down and spreads her legs a bit. Pixie sticks her cock in Mandie's anal and starts pumping while Ember grabs around her and kisses her on the lips, Mandy grabs around her to hold on tight and grunts as she's thrusting her cock in Ember's anal harder and faster while she's still got her own legs crossed around her to hang on tight.

Meanwhile, Eris is laying on the bed having her arms chained on the corner edges, Psyme crawls on her and licks around her tummy. She kisses forward on her body and reaches between her boobs, Eris moans softly as Psyme increase her pleasure. She kisses towards her neck and reaches for her faces, she squeezes her bluish boobs on her face and starts moaning. Now she crawls back and sucks her pussy while she reaches and rubs her boobs. Eris feels her tongue reaching inside, Psyme made her pussy cummed at her face, she licks them off her lips and had a sweet taste. Now she crawls on her and sticks her cocks in her pussy, she grabs and squeezes her boobs again while she starts pumping. Eris moans softly as her cock pushes in and hits her G-spot, Psyme bends down and kisses her on the lips to keep her from moaning while she gets her sack filled up. She cummed in her pulls and pulls it out, she unchains her arms and puts her in doggie style, Eris turns and watches Psyme licking her sweet pussy with her cum. She sticks her cock back in her pussy and starts pumping again, she grabs her by her hips and drills her deeper to hit her G-spot. Eris hears the sound of her sack pounding as Psyme hammers her ass, she cummed in her again and busted her sperms in her G-spot, she pulls it out and watches her cum oozing out of her pussy. Eris grabs and drinks green and brown potion to grow her cock and sack while Psyche gets her cock ready for anal penetration. She gets on her knees, grabs her butt cheeks and licks around her anal and licks inside, now she kisses around her butt cheeks to increase her love level. Now she gets up and points her tip of her cock at her anal, Eris closes her eyes and gets ready to orgasm as she's sticking her cock in her anal. Psyme holds her butt cheeks and pumps slowly and softly which makes her moan softly.

Eris feels her cock pushing in her anal and hits her G-spot, Psyme gives her a soft ass spanking while she pumps her anal until her sack gets fulls. She cummed and busted her sperms in her anal, she pulls it out and sucks her anal to drink her cum out. Eris hears a sound of her sucking her anal, Psyme have her bend all the way down and spreads her legs a bit so she can stick her cock back in her anal and go deeper. She gets her tip of her cock in her G-spot and starts drilling in her anal, Eris closes her eyes and suffers as she pounds her tip of her cock in her tight G-spot which increase her love and orgasm level. Psyme gets above and reaches with her left-hand to hold her head down while she drills her G-spot in her anal and smacks her right butt cheek with her right-hand. Eris loves her so much as she enjoys her full-time anal sex with her, Psyme cummed in her G-spot but she's still pumping while she's cumming to cream her ass. She bends back up, holds her butt cheeks and drills her ass slowly and harder with a sound of her tip of her cock pounding in her G-spot. Munaki (Pink Devil Dickgirl with blonde hair) crawls in the bed and shoves her pinkish cock in Eris's mouth to keep her from moaning while Psyme drills her tight G-spot and cumming in her anal with hot sperms.

Meanwhile, Mandy cummed in Ember's anal again and pulls it out, she gets off and licks her anal full of cum. Mandie made Ember's cock cummed and gave her a mouthful, Ember gets up and lays down and stretches out her cock. Mandie turns and watches Pixie humping her ass and smacking her butt cheeks, she made a last hump and cummed in her anal with sperms. She pulls it out and gets on her knees and licks around her sweet anal, she gets her tongue in and licks inside of her anal. Mandie feels horny ass she spreads her silky saliva around in her sweet anal, Pixie pulls her tongue out and flips her over. She gets above her, turns around and sits on her lap where her cock reaches in her anal. Mandie grabs her butt cheeks and starts humping, Mandy comes in front of Pixie and kisses her on the lips while she squeezes her own boobs on her boobs which increases her pleasure. Pixie feels her pure darkness of love dwelling around in her soul, Mandie cummed and creamed her anal again. She pulls it out so Pixie can make love on Mandy, she lays her down and crawls on her. Mandy grabs and puts on a pure lip-balm while Pixie gets her cock ready for anal penetration. She grabs Mandy's left-leg, bends it beside her on holds it still while she shoves her cock in her anal. She plugs her tip of her cock in her G-spot and humps her slowly and softly, her pure darkness of loves dwell to her body and clouds around in her orgasm as she pounds her tip of her cock in her G-spot.

Mandy closes her eyes and orgasms as Pixie feels her pleasure which grows softly, she speeds up and pumps her G-spot to get her sack filled. Mandy hears a sound of her sack pounding as she pounds her pinkish tip of her cock in her G-spot. Pixie cummed and creamed her G-spot with pure sperms that increase her orgasm level, she pulls it out and watches her cum oozing out of her anal. Mandy horny that her anal got creamed, her orgasm of pure darkness has grown softly within her soul. Pixie shoves her cock back in her anal and plugs her pinkish tip in her G-spot again, she licks around her neck and kisses around her cheeks. She looks her in the eyes and kisses her on the lips, as she lip locks her, Mandy's eyes glows in pure flames of darkness that reveals Pixie's true passion. Pixie grabs her arms and holds them down while Mandy crosses her legs around her, Pixie pumps her anal and pounds her pinkish tip in her tight G-spot. Mandy closes her eyes and concentrates on her summoner, her hands glows in dark flames and spills the puddle of pure darkness all over the floor under them. The arms of the 1st shadow demon form of Mandy summons from the puddle beside mandy and opens the mouth to hunger for the orgasm, it grabs Pixie's boobs, sucks her nipples and feeds her orgasm to Mandy's pure soul of darkness which grows her true sexual power. The 2nd shadow demon Mandy summoned behind Pixie and stretches out her large cock glowed on dark flame, She gets above her and puts her hands on her shoulders while she sticks her cock in her anal. She plugs her pinkish tip of her cock in her G-spot and starts pumping, Pixie closes her eyes and moans softly as her cock warms her pleasure of her soul. Mandy feels her body glowing in pure fire of darkness as she hears a sound of Pixie's orgasm.

Pixie speeds up a bit with her anal pumping to make Mandy moan softly in pain, Mandy feels her pinkish tip pounding in her G-spot which makes her orgasm grows stronger. Pixie cummed in her G-spot and creamed her anal with sperms, now she glows her eyes which increase her true sexual movement. The 2nd shadow demon goes in full power and thrusts her cock in her G-spot and her anal to make Pixie moan loudly in pain. Masane Amaha appears in transformation with her beauty nakedness, she comes and watches Mandy posing her shadow demon from her pure puddle of darkness. Pixie pulls her cock out of her anal so Masane can make her sexual movement on her, Pixie goes in doggie style and watches Mandy's 2nd shadow demon holding her butt cheeks and drilling her G-spot in her anal. The 3rd shadow demon rises in front of her and glows her eyes in dark flames, Mandy passes out after all shadow demons arised within three pieces of her souls. But the pure darkness remains in her body until one or all returns with her souls, Masane crawls on Mandy and watches her body glowing in pure fire of darkness. she opens her mouths and kisses her on the lips while Mandy's 1st shadow demon arises behind and squeezes her butt cheeks, She licks inside of her pussy while she feels the taste of Masane's butt cheeks with her mouths of her hands. Masane feels her mouth of her hands licking around as she rubs around her butt cheeks and sucks them.

The 1st shadow demon made Masane's pussy cummed and gave her a mouth with sperm, then she stops licking so Masane can sit up and grow her large cock and sack. Now she flips Mandy over and crawls on her, then she shoves her cock in her anal and plugs her reddish tip in her G-spot. She grabs around her and holds on tight while she starts pumping her G-spot in her anal, she feels Mandy's pure darkness growing stronger in her body as she pounds her reddish tip of her cock in her G-spot which gives her a pain in the ass. Masane gets her head over her right shoulder and licks around her cheek to increase her love level. After few minutes, Masane cummed in Mandy's G-spot and creamed her anal with her sperms. Now she pulls it out and flips her over, now she shoves her cock in back in her anal and plugs her reddish tip in her G-spot again. Then she crawls above her and puts a little cut on her left-wrist and drips bloods all over Mandy's boobs, a pure darkness absorbs Masane's blood through Mandy's skin which feed her power of darkness which gives her the same tattoo style Masane has. Masane grabs around her and lip locks her while she's pumping her G-spot in her anal.

Meanwhile, the 2nd shadow demon cummed in Pixie's anal and creamed her G-spot with blackish sperms, now she pulls it out and lays down. Pixie crawls over, turns and sits down on her cock where it reaches in her anal, 2nd shadow demon grabs her butt cheeks and humps her while 1st shadow demon comes and puts her hands her hands on her boobs where her mouths of her hands sucks her nipples. The 3rd shadow demon comes on Pixie's right side and kisses her on the lips, then she lip locks her to keep her from moaning. Pixie feels the 3rd demon's lips spreading pure darkness in her body and reaches for her pleasure of her soul. Their pieces of Mandy's souls gets stronger as they increases their sexual movement, Pixie's reaches and feels around the 1st shadow demon's body. The 3rd shadow demon glows her hands in pure flames and massages Pixie's body which warms her pleasure of orgasm.

The 2nd shadow demon cummed in Pixie's anal again, Pixie lays down on her and reaches from behind to grab around her. The 2nd shadow demon grabs her legs and bends them beside her while the 1st demon crawls on her and shoves her cock in her tight anal. She puts her hands on Pixie's boobs and humps her while her mouths of her hands keeps sucks on her sweet nipples to make her moan softly. The 3rd shadow demon comes on Pixie's right side and kisses her on the lip, she lip locks her to keep her from moaning. Then she reaches with her right-hand and rubs around her body, the 1st shadow demon speeds up with her anal pumping until her sack gets full, then she cummed and busted her blackish sperms in her G-spot. The 2nd shadow demon also cummed and busted her sperms out of Pixie's anal, the 1st shadow demon pulls it out so the 2nd shadow demon can pull her cock out and flip Pixie overl. The 3rd shadow demon glows her pointy finger in dark flame and pokes between Pixie's butt cheeks to make another anal, the 2nd shadow demon sticks her cock in her 1st anal and plugs her pinkish tip in her tight G-spot, then the 3rd shadow demon crawls on Pixie and shoves her cock in her 2nd anal. Then she shoves it all the way in to plug her pinkish tip in her G-spot, Pixie's orgasm grows stronger as they feels around her warm body which warms her pleasure. The 2nd shadow demon holds Pixie's butt cheeks and squeezes them while the 1st shadow demon comes on Pixie's left side and shoves her cock in her mouth to keep her from moaning.
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 7:47 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

(Part 2)

The 3rd shadow demon puts her hands on Pixie's shoulders and humps her ass while the 2nd one thrusts her cock in Pixie's 1st anal. Pixie feels horny as their cocks squeezes each others in her tight G-spot. Then after few minutes later, they cummed in Pixie's anals. Now they pulls their cocks out and switches over, the 2nd shadow demon shoves her cock in Pixie's 2nd anal and plugs her pinkish tip in her G-spot while the 3rd shadow demon sticks her cock in her 1st anal and plugs her tip in her G-spot. The 1st shadow demon cummed and gave Pixie a mouthful of blackish sperms, then she pulls it out and goes over to make love of Masane. Meanwhile, Serena Tsukino (From Sailor Moon) Appeared in transformation of her beauty nakedness, then she comes over and stretches out her sweet cock and sack with balls inside. Masane finished creaming Mandy's anal and pulls it out so Serena can make love on her, she crawls on her and feels around her warm body which increases her pleasure. Then she lifts her head and kisses her on the lips to spread her love in her pure darkness, then she sits up on her knees and grabs her legs, then she sticks her cock in her anal and plugs her pinkish tip in her G-spot. Mandy's pure darkness grows stronger which increases her pleasure of love, Serena spreads her legs and humps her while Mandy waits for her shadow demon clones to return to her body with her pieces of her soul.

Meanwhile, Sabrina speeds up with her anal riding on Lisa, then after few minutes later, she cummed and busted her sperms in her G-spot. She pulls it out and gets off so Lisa can get off after she finished creaming Wanda's anal, now she stopped pumping her anal and pulled it out. Marline pulls her cock out of Wanda's anal so she can and make love with Sabrina, Lisa bends over at the wall and watches Linda getting her reddish cock ready for anal sex, she comes behinds and grabs her butt cheeks. She stretches out her cock and pokes her big sack with her pinkish tip, then she rubs her cock under it to increase her pleasure. Now she stretches her cock up and slides between her reddish butt cheeks to do a butt job, Lisa feels her cock warming up her sweet ass, Linda points her pinkish tip at her tight anal and sticks it in slowly. She shoves it all the way in and plugs her tip in her G-spot, she spreads her own legs a bit and starts pumping, Lisa closes her eyes and moans softly each times Linda pounds her pinkish tip in her G-spot in her anal. Meanwhile, Sabrina lays down, bends her legs beside her and spreads them, Wanda comes over and uses her magic wand to get Sabrina's legs chained on the floor, Sabrina reaches with her right hand and removes the purple candle from her anal. Wanda crawls on her and kisses her on the lips while she sticks her cock in her tight anal and plugs her pinkish tip in her G-spot. Sabrina feels horny as she feels Wanda's pinkish tip glowed in her G-spot which touches her pleasure of orgasm. Wanda grabs around her to hold on tight while she pumps her G-spot in her anal, Sabrina raises her hands up and summons a toy-cock and a paddle, toy-cock reaches in Wanda's tight anal and pumps her while a paddles smacks her big butt cheeks.

Wanda's kisses her so hard that her ass got pumped and smacked, Sabrina looks her in the eyes as Wanda has her heart of love for her. Wanda speeds up a bit and hammers her sweet ass until her sack gets full, then she cummed and busted her sperms in her G-spot. Sabrina feels her sperms spreading around in her G-spot which touches her pleasure of love, the toy-cock's still pumping Wanda's anal while the paddle's smacking her butt cheeks so hard. Wanda pulls it out and gets off, then she uses her magic to unchain her so she can stand up and stretches out her cock. Wanda bends down in doggy style and watches the toy-cock pounding in her ass, now Sabrina cast a spell on them to disappear so she can make her true love on her. Wanda flips over and rubs her own boobs to make herself horny, Sabrina crawls over in doggy style and plays with her sweet cock, she rubs her big sack and slaps it. Then she squeezes her boobs on her cock to do a boob job, Wanda moans softly when Sabrina's boobs gets warm on her cock, Sabrina made her cock cummed and bukkaked on her boobs. Now she gets on her knees and cast a spell on Wanda's boobs to make them big and bouncy, she also cast a spell on her own boobs to make them big. Now she cast the spell to get her arms and legs chained on the floor, she also got her blind-folded, Wanda feels horny that she can't see what Sabrina's gonna do. Sabrina crawls on her and rubs around her boobs, then she pinches her pinkish nipples and presses them, now she grabs her own boobs and squeezes them on her boobs. Sabrina jiggles her boobs on her boobs to make it jiggle which makes her orgasm grow softly, now she licks around her right boob and sucks her sweet pinkish nipple, she feels the taste of her cherry breast milk as she sucks her nipple so hard. Now she cast a spell to unchain her legs, she gets her legs bended beside her and spreaded, then she got her lower thighs chained on the floor. Now she sticks her cock in her anal slowly and plugs her pinkish tip in her G-spot, she reaches and puts on a reddish lip-balm to increase her tauntness of love. Now she gets her hands on Wanda's arms and squeezes her boobs on Wanda's boobs while she's humping her slowly and softly, Wanda moans softly as she pounds her pinkish tip in her G-spot.

Sabrina speeds up and hammers her sweet ass until her sack gets full, then after few minutes later, she cummed and busted her sperms in Wanda's G-spot in her anal. Then she grabs around her to hold on tight while she keeps her pinkish tip of her cock in her G-spot, she puckers her lips at her and kisses her on the lips. Wanda feels her tongue stretching the trail of their saliva as Sabrina moves her head back and forward after each smooches on her lips. Marline comes over and stretches out her cock, she gets on her knees above Sabrina and shoves her cock in her anal, she holds her waist while she gets her pinkish tip plugged in her G-spot. Then she pumps her sweet ass slowly while Sabrina keeps smooching Wanda's lips and stretching their trail of saliva from their tongues. Marline puts her hands on Sabrina's shoulders and massages her to warm her pleasure of love, Sabrina reaches with her right-hand and summons a large toy-cock. Marline turns and watches the toy-cock reaches in her anal, she feels the tip of the cock plugging in her tight G-spot which increases her pleasure. Sabrina grabs around Wanda again and speeds up with her anal pumping on her sweet ass, Wanda moans loudly in pain as her pinkish cock gets warm in her tight anal as she thrusts her cock harder and faster. Marline gets her hands back on her waist and drills her anal deeper while the toy-cock pumps her tight G-spot, Marline leans back a bit and raises her head up, then she closes her eyes and moans softly in pain as the toy-cock pushes in her G-spot which increases her orgasm. Meanwhile, Linda got her sack full and then she cummed in Lisa's G-spot in her anal, she pulls it out and made a hot anal creampie with sperms. Then she gets on her knees and sucks her sweet anal, she grabs her butt cheeks and keeps her anal opened wide while Lisa pushes her guts and squirts her cum back out to give her a mouthful. Now she crawls in doggy style and watches Lisa fingers her own anal and licks her cum and sperms, then she comes behind in grabs her butt cheeks. She stretches out her cock and slides them up and down between her big reddish boobs, then she slides it out and pounds her pinkish tip on her big juicy sack. Linda bends all the way down and spreads her legs a bit, Lisa crawls in doggy above her and sticks her cock in her anal. Linda closes her eyes and gets ready for a sweet anal ride, Lisa bends down and grabs around her to hold on tight, then Linda reaches from behind to grab around her. Lisa whispers at her right-ear and says "Oh sis, I'm gonna pump your G-spot in your anal until you pass out. Then after you pass out, I'll cum and bust my sperms in your ass, then I'll keep anal riding on you until Marline pumps my anal and cum in me after she finish creaming Sabrina's anal", then Linda whispers back to her and said "Oh Lisa, you're so horny for me. I love you, sis". Lisa spreads her legs a bit and plugs her pinkish tip in her G-spot, Linda grunts as Lisa goes deeper and pounds her pinkish tip in her G-spot which gives her a pain in the ass. Lisa closes her eyes and moans softly at her ear as she pounds her big juicy reddish sack as she pumps her G-spot deeper in her sweet anal. Linda closes her eyes as she's about to pass out a bit, Lisa got her sack full, but she had to keep anal riding until Linda passes out.

Then after few minutes later, Linda closed her eyes and passed out, then Lisa made a last hump and made a sound of massive burst of boiling cum and sperms in her G-spot in her anal. Then she goes in full throttle and continued anal riding on her sweet reddish while she makes a sound of pounding her big juicy sack and pushes her boiling cum out off her tight anal. Then she gets on her knees and lifts her up, she gets her hands on her big boobs and shakes them up and down while Linda's still unconscious. Then she gets her head over her right shoulder and licks around her cheek, her gallon of boiling oozes out of Linda's anal and spills on the floor as she kept pumping her anal a lot and creamed her G-spot with boiling sperms. Meanwhile, Sabrina cummed and busted her sperms in Wanda's G-spot in her anal, then Marline made a last hump and made a sound of massive burst of boiling cum and sperms in Sabrina's G-spot in her tight anal. She pulls it out so she can pull her cock out of Wanda's anal and get off, she lays down and flips over while she watches Marline crawls in doggy style and watches a large toy-cock pumping her G-spot in her anal. Wanda uses her magic wand to get Sabrina's arms and legs spreaded and chained on the floor, Marline crawls on her back and grabs around her to hold on tight while she shoves her cock back in her anal and plugs her pinkish tip in her G-spot again. Wanda comes on her knees in front of them and stretches her large cock up, she grabs Marline's face and shoves her cock in her mouthful. Sabrina gets her hands on the floor and spreads her magical spell to spill the purple puddle, the purple tentacles rises up and grabs around Wanda's thighs. Then it reaches up and and gets in her mouth while the other one rises up and reaches in her tight anal, it sticks it's big peaches tip and plugs it in her G-spot. Then it starts pumping her ass while the rest of it's tentacles shoves down in her mouth, the toy-cock pulls out of Marline's anal so another tentacle rises up and sticks it's peaches tip out. It shoves in her anal and plugs it's tip in her G-spot, Marline speeds up a bit and thrusts her cock in Sabrina's G-spot in her anal faster and harder while the 4th tentacle pumps her sweet reddish ass and pounds it's peaches tip in her G-spot harder and faster. Sabrina closes her eyes and moans softly in pain while she listens to the sound of Marline's sack pounding as she hammers her sweet ass harder which increases her orgasm.

Then few minutes later, Marline cummed and busted her sperms in Sabrina's G-spot in her anal, the 4th tentacle also cummed and creamed her reddish ass with sperms and seeds. Sabrina felt horny and passed out a bit, Marline's still pumping her ass and creaming her anal while the 5th tentacle keeps pounding it's peaches tip in her G-spot in her anal. Wanda cummed and busted her sperms in Marline's mouth, then she pulls it out and comes behind them, the 5th pulls it out so Wanda can pump Marline's anal. She gets on her knees above her and shoves her cock in her anal, she holds her waist while she plugs her pinkish tip in her G-spot and starts pumping. The tentacles cummed and gave her a mouthful, then it pulls out and bukkakes at her face, now the 1st one goes back in her mouth while the 2nd one slides between her boobs. The 3rd tentacle cummed and busted it's sperms and seeds in her anal, now it continued pounding it's peaches tip in her G-spot while the seeds makes cum hot and gooey which increases her orgasm. Now the 4th one shoves in Wanda's anal and plugs it's peaches tip in her G-spot, Wanda sucks the 1st tentacle so hard as the 3rd and 4th tentacles shoves it's peaches tips in her G-spot which gives her a pain in the ass. Then after few minutes later, it cummed and busted more sperms in her ass, now it pulls out and starts bukkaking all over her. Wanda speeds up a bit and thrusts her cock in Marline's G-spot in her anal harder and faster until her sack gets up, then she cummed and busted her sperms in her ass. the 5th tentacle rises up and sticks it's peaches tip. Wanda gets her arms behind her back so it can grab around them and holds them up, then it comes around and shoves in her mouth. The 2nd tentacle cummed and bukkaked on her, it slides out and starts bukkaking at her boobs, now it starts sliding between her boobs again.

Meanwhile, Munaki cummed and gave Eris a mouthful of hot sperms, then she pulls it out and bukkakes at her face. Psyme finished creaming Eris's G-spot in her anal and pulls it out, Munaki gets on her knees behind Eris and sucks her anal, now she gets her tongue in and licks around while she's sucking. Eris reaches and tastes cum from her own anal, Psyme lays down and flips over, she gets her hands on her bluish butt cheeks and rubs around them. Now she dips her right-hand in her anal and fingers herself while she watches Munaki sucking Eris's anal cream pie with sperms. Munaki finished and pulls her tongue out, Eris gets on her knees and stretches her large cock while Psyme gets on her knees. Eris comes behind and shoves her cock in her anal, she shoves it all the way in to plug her pinkish tip in her G-spot. Psyme reaches from behind to grab around her, then Eris casts a spell to get her arms tied, now she gets her head over her right shoulder and says "Oh Psyme, you look even sexier than me. I feel like I'm starting to love you forever". Then she grabs around her waist and starts pumping her bluish ass, Psyme closes her eyes and moans softly. Munaki puts on a blackish lip-balm and comes on front of Psyme, she lifts her head up and kisses her on the lips, she lip locks her to keep her from moaning. Eris speeds up a bit and pounds her cock up in Psyme's G-spot in her anal to increase her warm pleasure. Munaki crawls on doggy style and sucks Psyme's cock to make her horny, Psyme raises her head up and moans loudly as Eris hammers her ass harder and faster. then she got her big sack full and busted her cum and sperms in her ass, Munaki also made her cock cummed and gave her a mouthful. Psyme felt horny that Eris got her ass creamed with sperms. Eris says to her "Oh sweetie, you're feeling horny, re(Part 2)

The 3rd shadow demon puts her hands on Pixie's shoulders and humps her ass while the 2nd one thrusts her cock in Pixie's 1st anal. Pixie feels horny as their cocks squeezes each others in her tight G-spot. Then after few minutes later, they cummed in Pixie's anals. Now they pulls their cocks out and switches over, the 2nd shadow demon shoves her cock in Pixie's 2nd anal and plugs her pinkish tip in her G-spot while the 3rd shadow demon sticks her cock in her 1st anal and plugs her tip in her G-spot. The 1st shadow demon cummed and gave Pixie a mouthful of blackish sperms, then she pulls it out and goes over to make love of Masane. Meanwhile, Serena Tsukino (From Sailor Moon) Appeared in transformation of her beauty nakedness, then she comes over and stretches out her sweet cock and sack with balls inside. Masane finished creaming Mandy's anal and pulls it out so Serena can make love on her, she crawls on her and feels around her warm body which increases her pleasure. Then she lifts her head and kisses her on the lips to spread her love in her pure darkness, then she sits up on her knees and grabs her legs, then she sticks her cock in her anal and plugs her pinkish tip in her G-spot. Mandy's pure darkness grows stronger which increases her pleasure of love, Serena spreads her legs and humps her while Mandy waits for her shadow demon clones to return to her body with her pieces of her soul.

Meanwhile, Sabrina speeds up with her anal riding on Lisa, then after few minutes later, she cummed and busted her sperms in her G-spot. She pulls it out and gets off so Lisa can get off after she finished creaming Wanda's anal, now she stopped pumping her anal and pulled it out. Marline pulls her cock out of Wanda's anal so she can and make love with Sabrina, Lisa bends over at the wall and watches Linda getting her reddish cock ready for anal sex, she comes behinds and grabs her butt cheeks. She stretches out her cock and pokes her big sack with her pinkish tip, then she rubs her cock under it to increase her pleasure. Now she stretches her cock up and slides between her reddish butt cheeks to do a butt job, Lisa feels her cock warming up her sweet ass, Linda points her pinkish tip at her tight anal and sticks it in slowly. She shoves it all the way in and plugs her tip in her G-spot, she spreads her own legs a bit and starts pumping, Lisa closes her eyes and moans softly each times Linda pounds her pinkish tip in her G-spot in her anal. Meanwhile, Sabrina lays down, bends her legs beside her and spreads them, Wanda comes over and uses her magic wand to get Sabrina's legs chained on the floor, Sabrina reaches with her right hand and removes the purple candle from her anal. Wanda crawls on her and kisses her on the lips while she sticks her cock in her tight anal and plugs her pinkish tip in her G-spot. Sabrina feels horny as she feels Wanda's pinkish tip glowed in her G-spot which touches her pleasure of orgasm. Wanda grabs around her to hold on tight while she pumps her G-spot in her anal, Sabrina raises her hands up and summons a toy-cock and a paddle, toy-cock reaches in Wanda's tight anal and pumps her while a paddles smacks her big butt cheeks.

Wanda's kisses her so hard that her ass got pumped and smacked, Sabrina looks her in the eyes as Wanda has her heart of love for her. Wanda speeds up a bit and hammers her sweet ass until her sack gets full, then she cummed and busted her sperms in her G-spot. Sabrina feels her sperms spreading around in her G-spot which touches her pleasure of love, the toy-cock's still pumping Wanda's anal while the paddle's smacking her butt cheeks so hard. Wanda pulls it out and gets off, then she uses her magic to unchain her so she can stand up and stretches out her cock. Wanda bends down in doggy style and watches the toy-cock pounding in her ass, now Sabrina cast a spell on them to disappear so she can make her true love on her. Wanda flips over and rubs her own boobs to make herself horny, Sabrina crawls over in doggy style and plays with her sweet cock, she rubs her big sack and slaps it. Then she squeezes her boobs on her cock to do a boob job, Wanda moans softly when Sabrina's boobs gets warm on her cock, Sabrina made her cock cummed and bukkaked on her boobs. Now she gets on her knees and cast a spell on Wanda's boobs to make them big and bouncy, she also cast a spell on her own boobs to make them big. Now she cast the spell to get her arms and legs chained on the floor, she also got her blind-folded, Wanda feels horny that she can't see what Sabrina's gonna do. Sabrina crawls on her and rubs around her boobs, then she pinches her pinkish nipples and presses them, now she grabs her own boobs and squeezes them on her boobs. Sabrina jiggles her boobs on her boobs to make it jiggle which makes her orgasm grow softly, now she licks around her right boob and sucks her sweet pinkish nipple, she feels the taste of her cherry breast milk as she sucks her nipple so hard. Now she cast a spell to unchain her legs, she gets her legs bended beside her and spreaded, then she got her lower thighs chained on the floor. Now she sticks her cock in her anal slowly and plugs her pinkish tip in her G-spot, she reaches and puts on a reddish lip-balm to increase her tauntness of love. Now she gets her hands on Wanda's arms and squeezes her boobs on Wanda's boobs while she's humping her slowly and softly, Wanda moans softly as she pounds her pinkish tip in her G-spot.

Sabrina speeds up and hammers her sweet ass until her sack gets full, then after few minutes later, she cummed and busted her sperms in Wanda's G-spot in her anal. Then she grabs around her to hold on tight while she keeps her pinkish tip of her cock in her G-spot, she puckers her lips at her and kisses her on the lips. Wanda feels her tongue stretching the trail of their saliva as Sabrina moves her head back and forward after each smooches on her lips. Marline comes over and stretches out her cock, she gets on her knees above Sabrina and shoves her cock in her anal, she holds her waist while she gets her pinkish tip plugged in her G-spot. Then she pumps her sweet ass slowly while Sabrina keeps smooching Wanda's lips and stretching their trail of saliva from their tongues. Marline puts her hands on Sabrina's shoulders and massages her to warm her pleasure of love, Sabrina reaches with her right-hand and summons a large toy-cock. Marline turns and watches the toy-cock reaches in her anal, she feels the tip of the cock plugging in her tight G-spot which increases her pleasure. Sabrina grabs around Wanda again and speeds up with her anal pumping on her sweet ass, Wanda moans loudly in pain as her pinkish cock gets warm in her tight anal as she thrusts her cock harder and faster. Marline gets her hands back on her waist and drills her anal deeper while the toy-cock pumps her tight G-spot, Marline leans back a bit and raises her head up, then she closes her eyes and moans softly in pain as the toy-cock pushes in her G-spot which increases her orgasm. Meanwhile, Linda got her sack full and then she cummed in Lisa's G-spot in her anal, she pulls it out and made a hot anal creampie with sperms. Then she gets on her knees and sucks her sweet anal, she grabs her butt cheeks and keeps her anal opened wide while Lisa pushes her guts and squirts her cum back out to give her a mouthful. Now she crawls in doggy style and watches Lisa fingers her own anal and licks her cum and sperms, then she comes behind in grabs her butt cheeks. She stretches out her cock and slides them up and down between her big reddish boobs, then she slides it out and pounds her pinkish tip on her big juicy sack. Linda bends all the way down and spreads her legs a bit, Lisa crawls in doggy above her and sticks her cock in her anal. Linda closes her eyes and gets ready for a sweet anal ride, Lisa bends down and grabs around her to hold on tight, then Linda reaches from behind to grab around her. Lisa whispers at her right-ear and says "Oh sis, I'm gonna pump your G-spot in your anal until you pass out. Then after you pass out, I'll cum and bust my sperms in your ass, then I'll keep anal riding on you until Marline pumps my anal and cum in me after she finish creaming Sabrina's anal", then Linda whispers back to her and said "Oh Lisa, you're so horny for me. I love you, sis". Lisa spreads her legs a bit and plugs her pinkish tip in her G-spot, Linda grunts as Lisa goes deeper and pounds her pinkish tip in her G-spot which gives her a pain in the ass. Lisa closes her eyes and moans softly at her ear as she pounds her big juicy reddish sack as she pumps her G-spot deeper in her sweet anal. Linda closes her eyes as she's about to pass out a bit, Lisa got her sack full, but she had to keep anal riding until Linda passes out.

Then after few minutes later, Linda closed her eyes and passed out, then Lisa made a last hump and made a sound of massive burst of boiling cum and sperms in her G-spot in her anal. Then she goes in full throttle and continued anal riding on her sweet reddish while she makes a sound of pounding her big juicy sack and pushes her boiling cum out off her tight anal. Then she gets on her knees and lifts her up, she gets her hands on her big boobs and shakes them up and down while Linda's still unconscious. Then she gets her head over her right shoulder and licks around her cheek, her gallon of boiling oozes out of Linda's anal and spills on the floor as she kept pumping her anal a lot and creamed her G-spot with boiling sperms. Meanwhile, Sabrina cummed and busted her sperms in Wanda's G-spot in her anal, then Marline made a last hump and made a sound of massive burst of boiling cum and sperms in Sabrina's G-spot in her tight anal. She pulls it out so she can pull her cock out of Wanda's anal and get off, she lays down and flips over while she watches Marline crawls in doggy style and watches a large toy-cock pumping her G-spot in her anal. Wanda uses her magic wand to get Sabrina's arms and legs spreaded and chained on the floor, Marline crawls on her back and grabs around her to hold on tight while she shoves her cock back in her anal and plugs her pinkish tip in her G-spot again. Wanda comes on her knees in front of them and stretches her large cock up, she grabs Marline's face and shoves her cock in her mouthful. Sabrina gets her hands on the floor and spreads her magical spell to spill the purple puddle, the purple tentacles rises up and grabs around Wanda's thighs. Then it reaches up and and gets in her mouth while the other one rises up and reaches in her tight anal, it sticks it's big peaches tip and plugs it in her G-spot. Then it starts pumping her ass while the rest of it's tentacles shoves down in her mouth, the toy-cock pulls out of Marline's anal so another tentacle rises up and sticks it's peaches tip out. It shoves in her anal and plugs it's tip in her G-spot, Marline speeds up a bit and thrusts her cock in Sabrina's G-spot in her anal faster and harder while the 4th tentacle pumps her sweet reddish ass and pounds it's peaches tip in her G-spot harder and faster. Sabrina closes her eyes and moans softly in pain while she listens to the sound of Marline's sack pounding as she hammers her swete ass harder which increases her orgasm.

Then few minutes later, Marline cummed and busted her sperms in Sabrina's G-spot in her anal, the 4th tentacle also cummed and creamed her reddish ass with sperms and seeds. Sabrina felt horny and passed out a bit, Marline's still pumping her ass and creaming her anal while the 5th tentacle keeps pounding it's peaches tip in her G-spot in her anal. Wanda cummed and busted her sperms in Marline's mouth, then she pulls it out and comes behind them, the 5th pulls it out so Wanda can pump Marline's anal. She gets on her knees above her and shoves her cock in her anal, she holds her waist while she plugs her pinkish tip in her G-spot and starts pumping. The tentacles cummed and gave her a mouthful, then it pulls out and bukkakes at her face, now the 1st one goes back in her mouth while the 2nd one slides between her boobs. The 3rd tentacle cummed and busted it's sperms and seeds in her anal, now it continued pounding it's peaches tip in her G-spot while the seeds makes cum hot and gooey which increases her orgasm. Now the 4th one shoves in Wanda's anal and plugs it's peaches tip in her G-spot, Wanda sucks the 1st tentacle so hard as the 3rd and 4th tentacles shoves it's peaches tips in her G-spot which gives her a pain in the ass. Then after few minutes later, it cummed and busted more sperms in her ass, now it pulls out and starts bukkaking all over her. Wanda speeds up a bit and thrusts her cock in Marline's G-spot in her anal harder and faster until her sack gets up, then she cummed and busted her sperms in her ass. the 5th tentacle rises up and sticks it's peaches tip. Wanda gets her arms behind her back so it can grab around them and holds them up, then it comes around and shoves in her mouth. The 2nd tentacle cummed and bukkaked on her, it slides out and starts bukkaking at her boobs, now it starts sliding between her boobs again.

Meanwhile, Munaki cummed and gave Eris a mouthful of hot sperms, then she pulls it out and bukkakes at her face. Psyme finished creaming Eris's G-spot in her anal and pulls it out, Munaki gets on her knees behind Eris and sucks her anal, now she gets her tongue in and licks around while she's sucking. Eris reaches and tastes cum from her own anal, Psyme lays down and flips over, she gets her hands on her bluish butt cheeks and rubs around them. Now she dips her right-hand in her anal and fingers herself while she watches Munaki sucking Eris's anal creampie with sperms. Munaki finished and pulls her tongue out, Eris gets on her knees and stretches her large cock while Psyme gets on her knees. Eris comes behind and shoves her cock in her anal, she shoves it all the way in to plug her pinkish tip in her G-spot. Psyme reaches from behind to grab around her, then Eris casts a spell to get her arms tied, now she gets her head over her right shoulder and says "Oh Psyme, you look even sexier than me. I feel like I'm starting to love you forever". Then she grabs around her waist and starts pumping her bluish ass, Psyme closes her eyes and moans softly. Munaki puts on a blackish lip-balm and comes on front of Psyme, she lifts her head up and kisses her on the lips, she lip locks her to keep her from moaning. Eris speeds up a bit and pounds her cock up in Psyme's G-spot in her anal to increase her warm pleasure. Munaki crawls on doggy style and sucks Psyme's cock to make her horny, Psyme raises her head up and moans loudly as Eris hammers her ass harder and faster. then she got her big sack full and busted her cum and sperms in her ass, Munaki also made her cock cummed and gave her a mouthful. Psyme felt horny that Eris got her ass creamed with sperms. Eris says to her "Oh sweetie, you're feeling horny, ready for a sweet ride?", then Psyme answered "Yes, my sweet blonde woman". Munaki lays down and stretches her cock up, Eris crawls in doggy style with her, they crawls above Munaki so Psyme can kiss her on the lips. She lip locks her and tongue kisses while Eris spreads her legs a bit and gives her a sweet ride on her bluish ass. Munaki gets her hands on Psyme's butt cheeks and squeezes them, then she smacks them to increase her pleasure of love. Eris whispers at Psyme's ears and says "Oh sweetie, your ass is so warm and tight", then she increases her power and thrusts her cock deeper in her G-spot in her anal as she pounds her big ass on her bluish ass which makes the sound of ass bouncing. Then after few minutes later, she got her sack full and made a sound of massive burst of cum and sperms in her anal. Psyme felt her cock busting cum and sperms in her G-spot, Eris whispers her and asks her "Ready for another sweet ride?", the Psyme answered "Oh sweetie, yes. I'm so horny for a sweet ride". Eris turns her around and force her to do a blow job on Munaki's cock while she's still anal riding on her, Munaki gets her hands on her bluish butt cheeks and holds them while she stares at Eris's cum oozes out of Psyme's anal and drips down on her face. Psyme closes her eyes and enjoys the blow job while she listens to the sound of Eris's cock pounding deeper in her G-spot in her anal which increases the level of her horniness. Munaki licks some gallon of Eris's cum dripping from Psyme's anal, Eris cummed and busted her sperms in her anal again, Psyme also made Munaki's cock cummed and gave her a mouthful of hot sperms. Eris whispers at her ear again and says "So, you like anal ride?" then she answered "Yes, I'm so horny, sweetie", now Eris said "Then you're gonna love this". Eris reaches and eats the golden apple to boost her sexual power temporary. She grows her extra arms, boosts her cock and tip strength and increases her cumming and sperm charger power, Psyme continues with the blow job on Munaki's cock while Eris gets her bottom hands on her big bluish boobs and squeezes them while she continued with the anal ride again.

Psyme gets her mouth off of Munaki's cock so she can get up and starts her cock, she grabs and puts pinkish lube-gel on her pinkish tip. Then she grabs Eris's waist and shoves her cock in her tight anal and plugs her tip in her G-spot. She spreads her legs a bit and humps her sweet ass, Eris goes deeper and pounds her cock down in Psyme's G-spot harder and faster. Psyme closes her eyes and orgasms softly in pain as Eris shoves her cock down in her anal which gives her a massive pain in the ass. Munaki reaches with her right-hand and smacks Eris's right butt cheek to make it jiggle, Eris turns and watches her spanking her butt cheek and making it jiggle. Munaki goes deeper and drills her anal harder and faster, then she got her sack full but she had to keep pumping until Eris cummed. Then after few minutes later, Eris made a last hump and made a loudly sound of massive burst of boiling cum and sperms in Psyme's G-spot in her anal. Munaki also cummed in her anal and creamed her G-spot with boiling sperms. Eris whispers at her ear and says "Oh honey, I creamed your ass so hard", then Psyme said "Oh Eris I felt so honey that you loved me a lot". Eris uses her spell to untie her hands, then she pulls it out and gets off. Munaki pulls her cock out of Eris's anal and grabs Psyme's butt cheeks, she opens her anal wide and watches her gallon of boiling cum oozes out of her anal. She dips her fingers in and licks some cum, Eris cum and sperms tastes juicy, sour and gooey. Munaki sticks her tongue on while she sucks her anal, Psyme reaches with her right-hand and enjoys the tastes of Eris's cum from her own enjoy. She says to Eris "Mmm, your cum tastes sweet and yummy", then Eris said "Of course it is, my sweet girl". Munaki finished with Psyme's anal cream pie with sperms, she pulls her tongue out and lays down. Psyme gets on her knees above her, turns around and sits down on her, then she grabs her big boobs and starts dragging her cock back and forth between them. Eris sits down on her knees and grabs Munaki's legs, she bends them down beside her, spreads them and holds them down with her top hands while she sticks her cock in her anal and plugs her yellowish tip in her G-spot. Then she grabs on her thighs and pumps her pinkish ass, Psyme squeezes Munaki's big boobs tight and drags her cock between her boobs harder and faster while she drags her bluish ass on her face and squirts Eris's cum on her. Munaki grabs her butt cheeks and licks cum from her anal, Psyme closes her eyes and orgasm as Munaki sticks her tongues in her anal and licks around which increases her warm pleasure. Eris got her sack full, she feels like she's gonna cum but she had to keep pumping until Munaki's G-spot cracks. Psyme bends over a bit so Eris can kiss her on the lips, she reaches and puts on some reddish lip-balm. Then she lifts Psyme's face up and lip locks her softly while her bottem hands grabs her knees and holds them down. Munaki reaches with her hands to rub Psyme's tummy, then she reaches up and rubs around her bluish boobs. She squeezes them and presses down on her nipples which touches her orgasm, Psyme moans softly as her nipples are pressed down on her bluish boobs. Eris licks around her neck and then kisses around her cheeks to put lip marks all over her. Now she kisses her on the lips and lip locks her again while she speeds up with her anal pumping and pounds her yellowish tip in Munaki's G-spot harder and faster to give her a massive pain in the ass.

Meanwhile, Serena speeds up and thrusts her cock in Mandy's anal, then she cummed and busted her sperms in her G-spot. Now she pulls it out and gets off, Masane lays down on her left sides, Serena lays down on her right side where she faces her. They grabs around each other and stares at each other's eyes, then they holds each other tight and kisses each other to make love. They starts lip locking each other while the 1st shadow demon gets on her knees grabs Serena's left-leg, she spreads it over Masane and holds it while she shoves her blackish cock in Serena's anal and plugs her blackish tip in her G-spot. Serena reaches with her left-hand to rub on the side of Masane's right butt cheek, then she rubs around over and between her butt cheeks. She dips her hands in her tight anal and fingers her to make her moan, Masane closes her eyes and moans softly to her. Then she kisses her and lip locks her again, the 1st shadow demon bends over and puts her right-hand on Serena's left shoulder while her left-hand holds her left-leg spreaded. Then she pumps her anal and pounds her blackish tip in her G-spot, Masane puts her right-hand on Serena's left butt cheek and rubs it, Serena closes her eyes and moans in pain as the 1st shadow demon hammers her ass and pounding her cock in her G-spot which makes her orgasm grow stronger. Then after few minutes, she got her blackish sack full, but she had to keep pumping until 2nd & 3rd finish pumping Pixie's anals. Now they cummed and busted their sperms in her anals, they pulls their cocks out and returns to Mandy's body, the 1st shadow demon cummed and creamed Serena's anal. Then she continued pumping her ass while Pixie stretches her cock, Serena pulls her fingers around so Pixie can pump her anal. She gets on her knees behind Masane and shoves her cock in her anal. She grabs her right-leg with her right-hand and holds them while she plugs her pinkish tip in her G-spot, then she gets her left-hand on her waist and holds on while she pounds her cock in her G-spot. The 1st shadow demon turns and kisses Pixie on the lips, Pixie lip locks her softly to spread her love in her warm body which touches her warm soul of orgasm. The 2nd & 3rd shadow demon returned to Mandy's body, then she woke up and felt the tastes of their orgasm which feeds her sexual power of love. She gets up and crawls in doggy style, she reaches with her arms and dips her hands in her tight anal. Then she fingers herself to start moaning softly, now she pulls her fingers out and licks their cum and sperms. Now she gets up on her knees and looks at herself, she grabs a mirror and stares at herself with a same tattoo type as Masane has. The 1st shadow demon finished creaming Serena's anal and pulls it out, then she returned to Mandy and feeds her soul with their orgasm and pleasure. Mandy raises her head up and orgasm softly as their pleasure and orgasm filled her pure soul of darkness which gives her more power. Pixie cummed and creamed Masane's anal with sperms, then she pulls it out and watches her cum oozes out and spills on the floor. Masane flips back over and stretches out her cock while Serena gets up on her knees and turns around. Then she gets around her and sit down on her lap where her cock reaches in her anal and gets her reddish tip plugged in her G-spot. Now she lays down on her and reaches from behind to grab around her and hold on tight, Masane grabs her big boobs and rubs around them while she starts humping her. Pixie gets above Serena and sits down on her knees, she slides her cock between her boobs and drags it back and forth while she drags her ass on her faces. She grabs her legs and bends them down beside her, then she spreads them and holds them while Mandy gets on her knees in front and shoves her cock in Serena's anal. She reaches to hold on to her lower thighs while she plugs her pinkish tip in her G-spot and starts pumping. Masane gets her head over Serena's right shoulder and starts licking around her cheek, Serena starts to orgasm, but Pixie got her ass on her face to keep her from moaning.

Mandy bends over so Pixie can bend over and kiss her on the lips, she lip locks her softly while she keeps dragging her cock back and forth between Serena's boobs. Masane feels like she's about to cum but she had to hold on and keep pumping until Pixie cummed, Mandy speeds up and pounds her cock in Serena's anal faster and harder. Serena feels Pixie's cock getting warmer as she drags it harder and faster, then she cummed and bukkaked on her. Masane also cummed and busted her sperms in her anal, Mandy's still pumping her as much as she loves making her suffer from their sexual advantage. Masane feels her cum oozing out of Serena's anal as she kept humping her ass, Mandy got her sack full and then busted her cum and sperms in her G-spot. Now she pulls it out and and watches her cum squirting out of her anal, Masane pulls her cock out and fingers her anal while Mandy licks her anal cream pie with sperms. Pixie crawls over and licks her anal cream pie with them, Serena dips her hands in her anal and fingers it, then she pulls it out and licks cum off her hand. Now she gets off and gets on her knees, Pixie gets behind her and shoves her cock in her anal, she plugs her pinkish tip in her G-spot and humps her. Serena reaches from behind to grab around her and holds on tight, Pixie gets her hands on her boobs and rubs them while she pounding her cock in her anal. Masane comes in front of her and gets on her knees, then she grabs on her chin with her left-hand and licks around her own lips as she stares at her eyes. Now she kisses her on the lips and lip locks her, Serena moans with her as they're tongue kissing each other. Mandy gets on her knees behind Masane and shoves her cock in her anal, then she plugs her pinkish tip in her G-spot and starts pumping. Masane feels her cock pounding in her G-spot which increases her orgasm, Pixie speeds up and thrusts her cock in Serena's anal harder and faster. Then she cummed and busted her sperms in her G-spot again, now she pulls it out and fingers her anal while Masane lip locks her sofly. Mandy closes her eyes and grunts as she's thrusting her cock in Masane's anal harder and faster, then she made a last hump and busted her cum and sperms in her G-spot. Now she pulls it out and watches her cum oozing out of her anal and dripping on the floor. Masane finished kissing her on the lips, Serena lays down and stretches her cock, Masane gets on her knees above her and sits down on her lap where her cock reaches in her anal and plugs her pinkish tip in her G-spot. Serena grabs and puts on a pinkish lip-balm while Masane lays down on her and grabs around her, Pixie gets above and sits down on her knees on Masane. She shoves her cock in her anal and plugs her pinkish tip in her G-spot, then she reaches from behind to grab her legs and holds them up. Now she starts humping her while Serena grabs around her to hold on tight, Masane closes her eyes and orgasms softly as they pushes each other's cocks in her G-spot in her anal. Mandy gets behind Pixie and shoves her cock in her G-spot in her anal, she gets her hands on her big boobs and rubs them while she pounds her cock in her anal. Masane kisses Serena on the lips and lip locks her while her reddish hair strings stretches out and reaches in Mandy's anal. Mandy gets her head over Pixie's right shoulder and licks around her cheek, Pixie turns and kisses her on the lips to make love.

Masane bends and gets her hands on Serena's shoulders, she turns and watches Mandy rubbing Pixie's boobs and lip locking her. Pixie glows her eyes as she's thrusting her cock in Masane's anal which increases her level of her anal pumping. She goes in full throttle and hammers her ass harder and faster, Masane breathes heavily and moans loudly in pain as Serena and Pixie pounds their cocks in her anal which gives her a pain in the ass. Mandy squeezes Pixie's boobs and shakes to make her moans softly while she's pounding her cock in her G-spot. Then she cummed and busted her sperms in her anal, now she pulls it out and watches her cum coming out of her anal and oozing on her sack. Pixie made a last hump and made sound of massive burst of cum and sperms in Masane's anal, Serena also cummed and busted her sperms in her G-spot. Mandy stands up on her knees and starts moaning while Masane's hair strings pushes up in her G-spot in her anal, Mandy reaches from behind to grab her butt cheeks and squeezes them. Her pure darkness grows warmer as she's orgasming, Pixie and Serena pulls their cocks out so Masane can get up on her knees and fingers her anal. Pixie gets her head over her shoulder and licks around her cheek, then she gets her hands in her mouth and fingers her to increase her love. Serena wipes their cum off the floor and licks them off her hands, grabs her cock and licks on her reddish tip. Mandy feels Masane's hair strings scratching inside of her anal as it pushes up harder and faster, Mandy pulls it out and watches her drip of dark-red blood leaking. Masane smells a drip of blood leaking from Mandy's anal, Serena stops sucking on her reddish tip and squeezes her boobs on her cock to do a boob job. Pixie dips her hand in her own anal and fingers her, then she pulls it out and licks cum off her hands. Masane closes her eyes and moans as she sucking on her fingers so hard, Serena made her cock cummed and bukkaked on her boobs. Then she gets up and sucks on her right nipple, Pixie pulls her hands out of her mouth and rubs on her left boob. Serena sucks her nipple so hard to drink her breast milk, then she stops sucking and licks around her boob. Masane stands up on her knees and stretches out her cock, then she grabs Pixie from behind and shoves her cock in her G-spot in her anal. She leans back and gets her hands on the floor while she's spreading her legs, Pixie lays down on her and reaches from behind to grab around her and holds on tight. She pushes her hips and pounds her cock up in her anal, she using her reddish hair strings to reach from under and grabs on her legs and spreads them. The other strings grabs on her nipples while more of them straps around her waist, Serena gets on Pixie's left side and shoves her cock in her mouth to keep her from moaning. Mandy crawls in doggie style and dips her finger in her anal, then she pulls it out and licks her dark-red blood from her anal. Now she gets up and gets in front of Pixie, she holds her waist while she shoves her cock in her anal and plugs her pinkish tip in her G-spot. Then she spreads her legs a bit and pumps her while Masane keeps up with her anal pumping on her, Serena gets her right-hand on Pixie's right boob and rubs them to increase her warm pleasure. Then after few minutes later, Serena cummed and gave her a mouthful of sperms, then she pulls it out and bukkakes at her face. Now she bends over and gets over above her, she turn and gets her cock back her mouth again. Now she grabs on Mandy's boobs and lip locks her softly, the shadow arms of 1st demon stretches from her boobs and gets her hands on Serena's boobs. Her mouth of her shadow hands sucks on her nipples to tastes her pleasure, Masane wipes Mandy's dark-red blood from her anal with her hair strings and licks it off. Then she gets her hair strings back in her anal and pumps her again, Mandy raises her head up and orgasms softly in pain as Masane dips more hair strings in her anal.

Pixie sucks Serena's cock so her as Masane kept pounding her cock up in her tight anal, then after few minutes later, she cummed and busted her sperms out her anal. Mandy also cummed and creamed Pixie's anal again, she pulls it out and watches their cum pushes out of her anal and oozes on Masane's sack. Serena cummed and gave Pixie a mouthful of sperms again, she pulls it out and bukkakes on her face. Then she comes around and gets on her knees, Mandy gets comes in front of her and gets on her knees too. Then she grabs and puts on a reddish lip-balm, Serena also puts on some more pinkish lip-balm. They comes closer and stares at each others eyes, they grabs around each other and squeezes each others boobs. They closes their eyes and smooches on each others lips, they lip locks each other and tongues kisses to spread their love around in their pleasure. Masane pushes her hair strings up in Mandy's anal harder and faster, Mandy feels her dark blood leaking out of her anal as her hair strings places a scratches inside of her which increases her orgasm of darkness. Masane pulls them out with a little drips of blood on each hair strings and sucks it off, then she wipes some more off from her anal and shoves them in Pixie's mouth. Pixie tastes Mandy's dark blood which tastes gooey and sweet, Masane finished creaming her anal and unstraps her. She puts her down and pulls her cock out. Mandy crawls in doggie style and bends all the way down, she closes her eyes and moans loudly as her anal got scratched by Masane's hair strings. Serena gets on her knees and grabs Mandy's butt cheeks, she kisses and puts lip marks all over them, then she opens her anal wide and watches her anal bleeding on the floor. She sticks her tongue in her anal and licks while she sucks it, Mandy breathes heavily in pain as her tongue touches her scratches which hurts her more. Serena sucks her anal so hard until it stops bleeding, Mandy reaches and wipes her dark blood off the floor and licks it off her hand. Serena pulls her tongue out and licks around her lips, then she gets on her knees and glows in pink as she's increasing her love level. Mandy gets on her knees and gets closer to her, she lifts her face up and glows hey eyes in pure flame at her. She says to her "Look into my eyes", when Serena stares at her pure flame in her eyes, she gets hypnotized. Her eyes turned red as Mandy hypnotized her with her pure flame in her eyes, She lays her down and crawls on her, she shoves her cock in her anal and plugs her pinkish tip in her G-spot. She grabs around her and holds on tight while she pounds her cock in her anal slowly. Serena crosses her legs around her while she's staring at her pure flamed eyes, Mandy lip locks her softly and spreads her pure darkness of love in her pleasure.

Serena feels her pure love of darkness spreading around in her soul of pleasure which warms her orgasm, Mandy licks each others tongues as she lip locks her softly. She holds her tight and speeds up with her anal pumping on her, Serena closes her eyes and moans loudly in pain as Mandy gives her a pain in the ass which makes her breathe heavily. Meanwhile, Masane gets on her knees and rubs her own boobs while she watches Pixie drinks some green, red and brown potions to grow her large cock and sack, she also drunk some orange and pink potions to grow her pinkish tip and boost her cumming up. Then she gets behind her and shoves her cock in her anal, she pushes it all the way in to plug her tip in her G-spot. Masane reaches from behind to grab around her and holds on tight while Pixie feels around her warm body, she gets her head over her right shoulder and licks around her neck. Then she kisses and puts lip marks on her cheek, now she stretches her arms and glows her hands on purple flames, the she grabs her boobs and rubs them while her purple flames warms through her body and touches her pleasure. Masane raises her head up and orgasms as Pixie pounds her cock in her anal and warms her boobs with her purple flame in her hands. Masane stretches her reddish hair strings and reaches in her anal, Pixie feels her hair strings pushes in her G-spot. Masane says to her "Aw yeah, you're good, Pixie", then Pixie said "Oh Masane, your ass is so tight and warm".Ready for a sweet ride?", then Psyme answered "Yes, my sweet blonde woman". Munaki lays down and stretches her cock up, Eris crawls in doggy style with her, they crawls above Munaki so Psyme can kiss her on the lips. She lip locks her and tongue kisses while Eris spreads her legs a bit and gives her a sweet ride on her bluish ass. Munaki gets her hands on Psyme's butt cheeks and squeezes them, then she smacks them to increase her pleasure of love. Eris whispers at Psyme's ears and says "Oh sweetie, your ass is so warm and tight", then she increases her power and thrusts her cock deeper in her G-spot in her anal as she pounds her big ass on her bluish ass which makes the sound of ass bouncing. Then after few minutes later, she got her sack full and made a sound of massive burst of cum and sperms in her anal. Psyme felt her cock busting cum and sperms in her G-spot, Eris whispers her and asks her "Ready for another sweet ride?", the Psyme answered "Oh sweetie, yes. I'm so horny for a sweet ride". Eris turns her around and force her to do a blow job on Munaki's cock while she's still anal riding on her, Munaki gets her hands on her bluish butt cheeks and holds them while she stares at Eris's cum oozes out of Psyme's anal and drips down on her face. Psyme closes her eyes and enjoys the blowjob while she listens to the sound of Eris's cock pounding deeper in her G-spot in her anal which increases the level of her hornyness. Munaki licks some gallon of Eris's cum dripping from Psyme's anal, Eris cummed and busted her sperms in her anal again, Psyme also made Munaki's cock cummed and gave her a mouthful of hot sperms. Eris whispers at her ear again and says "So, you like anal ride?" then she answered "Yes, I'm so horny, sweetie", now Eris said "Then you're gonna love this". Eris reaches and eats the golden apple to boost her sexual power temporary. She grows her extra arms, boosts her cock and tip strength and increases her cumming and sperm charger power, Psyme continues with the blow job on Munaki's cock while Eris gets her bottom hands on her big bluish boobs and squeezes them while she continued with the anal ride again.

Psyme gets her mouth off of Munaki's cock so she can get up and starts her cock, she grabs and puts pinkish lube-gel on her pinkish tip. Then she grabs Eris's waist and shoves her cock in her tight anal and plugs her tip in her G-spot. She spreads her legs a bit and humps her sweet ass, Eris goes deeper and pounds her cock down in Psyme's G-spot harder and faster. Psyme closes her eyes and orgasms softly in pain as Eris shoves her cock down in her anal which gives her a massive pain in the ass. Munaki reaches with her right-hand and smacks Eris's right butt cheek to make it jiggle, Eris turns and watches her spanking her butt cheek and making it jiggle. Munaki goes deeper and drills her anal harder and faster, then she got her sack full but she had to keep pumping until Eris cummed. Then after few minutes later, Eris made a last hump and made a loudly sound of massive burst of boiling cum and sperms in Psyme's G-spot in her anal. Munaki also cummed in her anal and creamed her G-spot with boiling sperms. Eris whispers at her ear and says "Oh honey, I creamed your ass so hard", then Psyme said "Oh Eris I felt so honey that you loved me a lot". Eris uses her spell to untie her hands, then she pulls it out and gets off. Munaki pulls her cock out of Eris's anal and grabs Psyme's butt cheeks, she opens her anal wide and watches her gallon of boiling cum oozes out of her anal. She dips her fingers in and licks some cum, Eris cum and sperms tastes juicy, sour and gooey. Munaki sticks her tongue on while she sucks her anal, Psyme reaches with her right-hand and enjoys the tastes of Eris's cum from her own enjoy. She says to Eris "Mmm, your cum tastes sweet and yummy", then Eris said "Of course it is, my sweet girl". Munaki finished with Psyme's anal cream pie with sperms, she pulls her tongue out and lays down. Psyme gets on her knees above her, turns around and sits down on her, then she grabs her big boobs and starts dragging her cock back and forth between them. Eris sits down on her knees and grabs Munaki's legs, she bends them down beside her, spreads them and holds them down with her top hands while she sticks her cock in her anal and plugs her yellowish tip in her G-spot. Then she grabs on her thighs and pumps her pinkish ass, Psyme squeezes Munaki's big boobs tight and drags her cock between her boobs harder and faster while she drags her bluish ass on her face and squirts Eris's cum on her. Munaki grabs her butt cheeks and licks cum from her anal, Psyme closes her eyes and orgasm as Munaki sticks her tongues in her anal and licks around which increases her warm pleasure. Eris got her sack full, she feels like she's gonna cum but she had to keep pumping until Munaki's G-spot cracks. Psyme bends over a bit so Eris can kiss her on the lips, she reaches and puts on some reddish lip-balm. Then she lifts Psyme's face up and lip locks her softly while her bottem hands grabs her knees and holds them down. Munaki reaches with her hands to rub Psyme's tummy, then she reaches up and rubs around her bluish boobs. She squeezes them and presses down on her nipples which touches her orgasm, Psyme moans softly as her nipples are pressed down on her bluish boobs. Eris licks around her neck and then kisses around her cheeks to put lip marks all over her. Now she kisses her on the lips and lip locks her again while she speeds up with her anal pumping and pounds her yellowish tip in Munaki's G-spot harder and faster to give her a massive pain in the ass.

Meanwhile, Serena speeds up and thrusts her cock in Mandy's anal, then she cummed and busted her sperms in her G-spot. Now she ulls it out and gets off, Masane lays down on her left sides, Serena lays down on her right side where she faces her. They grabs around each other and stares at each other's eyes, then they holds each other tight and kisses each other to make love. They starts lip locking each other while the 1st shadow demon gets on her knees grabs Serena's left-leg, she spreads it over Masane and holds it while she shoves her blackish cock in Serena's anal and plugs her blackish tip in her G-spot. Serena reaches with her left-hand to rub on the side of Masane's right butt cheek, then she rubs around over and between her butt cheeks. She dips her hands in her tight anal and fingers her to make her moan, Masane closes her eyes and moans softly to her. Then she kisses her and lip locks her again, the 1st shadow demon bends over and puts her right-hand on Serena's left shoulder while her left-hand holds her left-leg spreaded. Then she pumps her anal and pounds her blackish tip in her G-spot, Masane puts her right-hand on Serena's left butt cheek and rubs it, Serena closes her eyes and moans in pain as the 1st shadow demon hammers her ass and pounding her cock in her G-spot which makes her orgasm grow stronger. Then after few minutes, she got her blackish sack full, but she had to keep pumping until 2nd & 3rd finish pumping Pixie's anals. Now they cummed and busted their sperms in her anals, they pulls their cocks out and returns to Mandy's body, the 1st shadow demon cummed and creamed Serena's anal. Then she continued pumping her ass while Pixie stretches her cock, Serena pulls her fingers around so Pixie can pump her anal. She gets on her knees behind Masane and shoves her cock in her anal. She grabs her right-leg with her right-hand and holds them while she plugs her pinkish tip in her G-spot, then she gets her left-hand on her waist and holds on while she pounds her cock in her G-spot. The 1st shadow demon turns and kisses Pixie on the lips, Pixie lip locks her softly to spread her love in her warm body which touches her warm soul of orgasm. The 2nd & 3rd shadow demon returned to Mandy's body, then she woke up and felt the tastes of their orgasm which feeds her sexual power of love. She gets up and crawls in doggy style, she reaches with her arms and dips her hands in her tight anal. Then she fingers herself to start moaning softly, now she pulls her fingers out and licks their cum and sperms. Now she gets up on her knees and looks at herself, she grabs a mirror and stares at herself with a same tattoo type as Masane has. The 1st shadow demon finished creaming Serena's anal and pulls it out, then she returned to Mandy and feeds her soul with their orgasm and pleasure. Mandy raises her head up and orgasm softly as their pleasure and orgasm filled her pure soul of darkness which gives her more power. Pixie cummed and creamed Masane's anal with sperms, then she pulls it out and watches her cum oozes out and spills on the floor. Masane flips back over and stretches out her cock while Serena gets up on her knees and turns around. Then she gets around her and sit down on her lap where her cock reaches in her anal and gets her reddish tip plugged in her G-spot. Now she lays down on her and reaches from behind to grab around her and hold on tight, Masane grabs her big boobs and rubs around them while she starts humping her. Pixie gets above Serena and sits down on her knees, she slides her cock between her boobs and drags it back and forth while she drags her ass on her faces. She grabs her legs and bends them down beside her, then she spreads them and holds them while Mandy gets on her knees in front and shoves her cock in Serena's anal. She reaches to hold on to her lower thighs while she plugs her pinkish tip in her G-spot and starts pumping. Masane gets her head over Serena's right shoulder and starts licking around her cheek, Serena starts to orgasm, but Pixie got her ass on her face to keep her from moaning.

Mandy bends over so Pixie can bend over and kiss her on the lips, she lip locks her softly while she keeps dragging her cock back and forth between Serena's boobs. Masane feels like she's about to cum but she had to hold on and keep pumping until Pixie cummed, Mandy speeds up and pounds her cock in Serena's anal faster and harder. Serena feels Pixie's cock getting warmer as she drags it harder and faster, then she cummed and bukkaked on her. Masane also cummed and busted her sperms in her anal, Mandy's still pumping her as much as she loves making her suffer from their sexual advantage. Masane feels her cum oozing out of Serena's anal as she kept humping her ass, Mandy got her sack full and then busted her cum and sperms in her G-spot. Now she pulls it out and and watches her cum squirting out of her anal, Masane pulls her cock out and fingers her anal while Mandy licks her anal cream pie with sperms. Pixie crawls over and licks her anal cream pie with them, Serena dips her hands in her anal and fingers it, then she pulls it out and licks cum off her hand. Now she gets off and gets on her knees, Pixie gets behind her and shoves her cock in her anal, she plugs her pinkish tip in her G-spot and humps her. Serena reaches from behind to grab around her and holds on tight, Pixie gets her hands on her boobs and rubs them while she pounding her cock in her anal. Masane comes in front of her and gets on her knees, then she grabs on her chin with her left-hand and licks around her own lips as she stares at her eyes. Now she kisses her on the lips and lip locks her, Serena moans with her as they're tongue kissing each other. Mandy gets on her knees behind Masane and shoves her cock in her anal, then she plugs her pinkish tip in her G-spot and starts pumping. Masane feels her cock pounding in her G-spot which increases her orgasm, Pixie speeds up and thrusts her cock in Serena's anal harder and faster. Then she cummed and busted her sperms in her G-spot again, now she pulls it out and fingers her anal while Masane lip locks her sofly. Mandy closes her eyes and grunts as she's thrusting her cock in Masane's anal harder and faster, then she made a last hump and busted her cum and sperms in her G-spot. Now she pulls it out and watches her cum oozing out of her anal and dripping on the floor. Masane finished kissing her on the lips, Serena lays down and stretches her cock, Masane gets on her knees above her and sits down on her lap where her cock reaches in her anal and plugs her pinkish tip in her G-spot. Serena grabs and puts on a pinkish lip-balm while Masane lays down on her and grabs around her, Pixie gets above and sits down on her knees on Masane. She shoves her cock in her anal and plugs her pinkish tip in her G-spot, then she reaches from behind to grab her legs and holds them up. Now she starts humping her while Serena grabs around her to hold on tight, Masane closes her eyes and orgasms softly as they pushes each others cocks in her G-spot in her anal. Mandy gets behind Pixie and shoves her cock in her G-spot in her anal, she gets her hands on her big boobs and rubs them while she pounds her cock in her anal. Masane kisses Serena on the lips and lip locks her while her reddish hair strings stretches out and reaches in Mandy's anal. Mandy gets her head over Pixie's right shoulder and licks around her cheek, Pixie turns and kisses her on the lips to make love.


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PostPosted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 6:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

*sigh* I didn't want to say this for fear of hurting some feelings, but these "stories" of yours are extremely hard to read. There doesn't seem to be much coherent "story" to it, just long blocks of text describing sex acts in extremely graphic, but grammatically poor, detail. Most of it seems to endlessly repeat the same themes over and over again, which can also be pretty boring.

To help you out, I suggest you check out the "How To" section on Literotica. There's plenty of reading material there submitted by other authors of erotica, meant to help budding authors hone their craft. Look for articles that talk about building a story or creating characters, and especially look for anything related to making the "action" in your scenes less repetitive and more engaging to the reader.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/stories_by_category.php?category=8&page=1

I also highly recommend just reading a lot of the stories on that site (there are lots of different sections, genres, and fetishes included there). See what sort of techniques other authors use and figure out what is effective and what is not.

Again, sorry for this sudden criticism, but I think you obviously have a strong interest in sharing your vision with us. My intent is not to hurt your feelings or make fun of the way you write, just to hopefully guide you toward creating stories that can be more accessible to your readers.
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 7:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I've corrected my grammars already, in fact. I like this in Italic. Keep reading until you understand. I read it better with my own eyes, at least someone would read this.

So don't worry about it and give my feed back.

Anyway, this is a story to me. At least someone from another site appreciate my story typing skill. I don't care how bad it is, it's sexible. My story skill is fine to me, so just don't worry about my typing and grammar okay?^_^


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PostPosted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 7:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Fair enough, work with what's comfortable with you, just don't give up on always trying to improve...
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