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goddess-ofthe-night
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The wip looks great 
*hugs xivk* thanks dear XD
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xivk
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*hugs goddess* Your very welcome. ^_^
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Lidia_Apricot
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Yes! Ms. Goddess looks really beautiful.
And tall,too, compare to Lidia. 
Can't wait to see the page in color. ^w^
| Xebulon wrote: | | UltimaWolf0 wrote: | Just saw the WIP and it looks great. Plus we get to see that "mysterious" person here. 
Though I have to say, realistically shouldn't Xeb be in the back row considering his size and height. I can see some of the back row guys partially obstructed. Nothing against Xeb, just an odd observation. |
An interesting point, Ultima. I'd be perfectly happy o move to the back row but for some reason I seem to be unable to stand up. Maybe I've taken root? Or perhaps my legs have gone to sleep? Oh, I know! It must be an early onset of arthritis. Or, could it possibly be a lack of concern for the proles behind me? The world may never know.  |
Or, maybe,...you're stuck. :3
Joking. |
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Kasumi
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I didn't realize that it was Goddess of the Night in the third panel of the work in progress until you guys mentioned it. Good thing that I read this thread; I was going to ask about it.
I always thought that it was nice that Vanessa always draws the cast wearing different outfits on different days. Wow, Betty's outfit is so sexy. |
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goddess-ofthe-night
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| Posted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 12:27 pm Post subject: |
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| Lidia_Apricot wrote: | Yes! Ms. Goddess looks really beautiful.
And tall,too, compare to Lidia.
Can't wait to see the page in color. ^w^
| Xebulon wrote: | | UltimaWolf0 wrote: | Just saw the WIP and it looks great. Plus we get to see that "mysterious" person here.
Though I have to say, realistically shouldn't Xeb be in the back row considering his size and height. I can see some of the back row guys partially obstructed. Nothing against Xeb, just an odd observation. |
An interesting point, Ultima. I'd be perfectly happy o move to the back row but for some reason I seem to be unable to stand up. Maybe I've taken root? Or perhaps my legs have gone to sleep? Oh, I know! It must be an early onset of arthritis. Or, could it possibly be a lack of concern for the proles behind me? The world may never know. |
Or, maybe,...you're stuck. :3
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goddess is normally smaller then you Lidia, but i'm sure she's sitting on her tail XD all that fluffy ness gave her a higher notch XD
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UltimaWolf0
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| Posted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 6:54 pm Post subject: |
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| Lidia_Apricot wrote: | Yes! Ms. Goddess looks really beautiful.
And tall,too, compare to Lidia.
Can't wait to see the page in color. ^w^
| Xebulon wrote: | | UltimaWolf0 wrote: | Just saw the WIP and it looks great. Plus we get to see that "mysterious" person here.
Though I have to say, realistically shouldn't Xeb be in the back row considering his size and height. I can see some of the back row guys partially obstructed. Nothing against Xeb, just an odd observation. |
An interesting point, Ultima. I'd be perfectly happy o move to the back row but for some reason I seem to be unable to stand up. Maybe I've taken root? Or perhaps my legs have gone to sleep? Oh, I know! It must be an early onset of arthritis. Or, could it possibly be a lack of concern for the proles behind me? The world may never know. |
Or, maybe,...you're stuck. :3
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We may need some crowbars. |
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Xebulon
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| Lidia_Apricot wrote: | Or, maybe,...you're stuck. :3
Joking. |
I'm not stuck! I... just don't feel like moving right now. 
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Vanessa
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Yup! Page 1 is finished! Just a little patience ^_^
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Lidia_Apricot
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Wow...
I had seen couple of goth Lolita outfits in Real life, comic, or online comic, but that is the most beautiful goth Lolita dress I have ever seen.
The light purple highlight on Betty's hair absolutely looks great with the dress. ^w^
What a magnificent page!
There is just one, small, little, error.
Is a small misspelling in the first panel, you misspelled "Theater." :3
I know almost some people here will might be a little upset with me because I pointed out a small flaw from this wonderful page, but as a PBB member/fan/supporter, I want to help Ms. Vanessa and Mr. Martin as much as I can and help themselves improve more. ^w^
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Chaosengine
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Betty looks... breathtaking.
Well Done!
*claps*
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xivk
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| Posted: Thu Dec 10, 2009 6:51 pm Post subject: |
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...."daaaaamn"
Amazing detail. *claps*
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Lidia_Apricot
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| Posted: Thu Dec 10, 2009 6:55 pm Post subject: |
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Indeed!
What I love about the dress is the lace and the hair bow!
I almost forgot to add about how Ms. Goddess looks so lovely and shiny! Especially her eyes. OwO
You look soooo beautiful, Ms. Goddess! ^w^ |
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xivk
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Indeed she does. ^w^
Thinking on it too seems like a good idea I did that cause you woulda been the only female royal member there. lol
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Lidia_Apricot
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Perhaps. I wouldn't mind being the only female in front row.
Kidding. I enjoy Ms. Goddess company.
You're so sweet giving up your seat for our favorite BonBon pet. ^w^
Looking forward seeing your avatar in the future. ^w^ |
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I believe the term 'ethereal beauty' applies well to GoTN, congratulations!
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| Posted: Thu Dec 10, 2009 7:29 pm Post subject: |
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| Lidia_Apricot wrote: | Is a small misspelling in the first panel, you misspelled "Theater." :3
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I went ahead and did a little photoshop fixing on that page.
Check it now. Should be fixed.
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Lidia_Apricot
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| Yep. Is fixed. :3 |
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Xebulon
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| Posted: Thu Dec 10, 2009 10:43 pm Post subject: |
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| Lidia_Apricot wrote: | | Is a small misspelling in the first panel, you misspelled "Theater." :3 |
It's not so much a misspelling as an alternate spelling. The "re" endings are more common on British words that use "er" in the US.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/American_and_British_English_spelling_differences#-re.2C_-er
And it looks fantabulous, as always, Ms. Santato. 
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I fixed it from Teathre to Theatre
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I look so 'pretty'
xivk your a doll baby :'3
Vanessa your a goddess t-t
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Vanessa
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thanks to everyone for the compliments!
So...what is the right spelling?
Thanks to Ronald for the fix
I drew a gothic lolita dress to homage Zone tan ( a japan goth girl I suppose) , I am happy that is quite appreciated, I created the spider web texture for the stockings by miself with photoshop 
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Lidia_Apricot
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Didn't know that. :3
Well, of course I don't know this because I mostly learned American and Spanish words. ^^!
| Vanessa wrote: |
I drew a gothic lolita dress to homage Zone tan ( a japan goth girl I suppose) , I am happy that is quite appreciated, I created the spider web texture for the stockings by miself with photoshop Idea |
And you did a magnificent job on the dress decoration, Ms. Vanessa. ^w^
I'm thinking now that Princess Betty definitely looks good with eye shadows and any goth Lolita dress. But the one she's wearing right now, takes the cake. ^w^ |
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I just got royal member today and i got my first look at the comic.
I can't stop looking at Betty's dress
the bow, the cross ear-ring, the purple veins of hair, and especially the spider web pattern on her legs. Stunning details
I thinks purple&gold are my new favorite colors on Betty.
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Oooh.. Betty mentioned me!
That's pretty fantastic, Vanessa, looking forward to seeing more! (I chuckled when I saw Zone, actually, that's cute - at least I assume that's Zone ).
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I really love the colouring, the Godess looks somehow transparent but is still clearly visible
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| Posted: Fri Dec 11, 2009 8:03 pm Post subject: |
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Loving the page. Betty's dress is simply stunning.
Another slight mistake on the page is my name is missing the "0" (zero), but it's quite alright. |
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| Posted: Wed Dec 16, 2009 6:00 pm Post subject: |
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It looks fabulous Vanessa!
GotN, you are looking wonderous. And it looks like the chibi version in your comic was right. She is much taller.
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| Posted: Fri Dec 18, 2009 8:49 am Post subject: |
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Page 2 is here ^_^
Silly Randy, stealing panties and bras 
....and where was Zone sneaking off to in the first place? 
Outstanding work Vanessa, Truly spectacular
I can't wait to see Zone's face, I'll bet that she will look absolutely stunning.
I hope Zone is enjoying this mini comic as much as we are. ^_^
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xivk
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| Posted: Fri Dec 18, 2009 9:33 am Post subject: |
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Have you no shame randy? lol
Now the wait for page 3...
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